I loved this story

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Wow, that was fabulously intense!

Finished :-( sad. So good, I loved it. They were both feeling the same thing, just too emotional for either of them to say what they really wanted to, so instead they both consumed each other, letting their actions stand for their unspoken words. Thanks for the great read :-)

Awesome, really love how you capture the emotions of these two.

Finish? Noooo.

Oh. This was soooo good. I'm glad I waited until now to read it, giving myef a bit if a reward. And, God, this was the perfect reward.

Thank you so much for writing and Sharon this. There was so much raw emotion, and I love that. Not only is your writing impeccable, I love all the imagery. I have no words... I just love it.

After this chapter I am not sure where this is going to go. I hope that this doesn't pull them apart Maybe it will work out in the end, but what they will have to go through to get there will probably almost destroy them both.

Wow! I really loved this line from the first chapter: "Different agendas, different intentions and yet it left them in the same place. He had needed to wash the blood away from her face before it became a permanent vision in his retinas. She had – apparently – needed to wash away the invisible blood inside her mind with human contact. They had both needed to be far away from the seeking eyes of others." Well, all of it was amazing. So vivid and amazingly written. Ahhh. Loved it.

And the second chapter was fantastic. I teared up while picturing them having sex... Oddly, I enjoy the angst mixed with the implied sex they are having. I love all the emotion, and the short dialogue where he thought he was about to lose her and her own response. Ugh. So painful, so amazing.

I can't wait for more!

Meget Bra :)

I do get the reason for having sex at this point. I hope that is doesn't pull them apart though and that she doesn't regret it to much/ May she will be worn out enough to go home but with Sharon you never really know. I do think that the worst is yet to come.

Out of control Andy and Sharon... love it!

Was just hoping for another story from you. Then this popped up on my screen. Magic. Very interesting first chapter - I'm hooked.

I love it so far! I love the situation that you have set up here, and I loved getting both Sharon's and Andy's POV. I'm excited to find out what happens next! Have I told you lately how much I love your writing!? :D

Your way of writing is so exceptional. When I read this, it's like I can see it happening right in front of me.
I like it when Sharon is in danger, and your description was so vivid, with the blood spattering and all.
I love Andy trying to get her to talk to him. Those last lines just perfect.

I kind of wonder what will happen next, will he get through to her? Or will he give in so he can at least take her pain away?

This was awesome- please let there be more!