you made me cry...not just a few tears...outright cry...this isn't meant as an insult just a statement. You are a good writer.

This was so adorable! You made an amazing blend of angst and adorable, and I absolutely loved it! I almost teared up a little while reading the part on Celina's death, which I don't hardly do, so props to you!

Oh no poor Jack

Awww little Jake

What song is that? It’s really beautiful.

Babies have their first words at 1-1/2 years old by four their fluently speaking just a year of from when they usually start school

Please excuse me while I most definitely do NOT cry
Step 1 sit in corner
Step 2 rock back and forwards
Step 3 try not to cry
Step 4 spend several hours crying

Ohhhhh damn
The ice skates
I give up. Too much screaming at the laptop
Just .. just damn

Nooooooooooooooooooooo
The angst is too much
Dying ... from ... Emotions

That reminds me of what I did for my nephew a few years ago. I was at my aunts house and just sitting there reading when I heard him walking on the stairs. I looked up and saw him. When I went back to my book I heard something and looked up to see him in their pool. He didn’t know how to swim and I’m really good at it. I screamed my sisters name and ran into the pool. I still had my shirt over my bathing suit. When I got him up he was coughing a little bit. But he was ok. I wasn’t aloud to go in the pool without someone watching me but I had to do something

I can still remember when I lost my first teeth. I lost my front teeth when I was five. They were really lose for a while and then I had to get something done so they pulled them out. They didn't grow back until around fourth grade. As for my last baby tooth, I had to get it pulled out . It was loose from the age of like ten to twelve when I got it pulled out for me to get my braces.

Your cover pic reminds me of Horrid Henry. Yea, that was the only reason I came here to say. Your cover pic reminds me of Horrid Henry.

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Bye.

I like it I have a boyfriend that I knew for four years. I was at a school for students with need. I had been in it for two years when he left. He started having a crush on me as soon as I was in the classroom. I sat next to him and would see him look at me. Two years ago we started and not one fight. I have trouble with my right and has trouble with his left so put us together and we're one person.

That was beautiful...

Ik I shoulda commented before, but isn't Jack's name Jack Overland - or Overlander - and then when MiM wakes him up he renames him Jack Frost? Love the story btw!