MORE PLEASE!NEED MORE!

Loving the story so far! Hope to get an update soon!

Saudades de Jareth... é como uma droga viciante!

I devoured the chapters that you have written here and I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story as soon as you get them finished!

I love this story, It's so sweet! please Please PLEASE keep updating!

I liked this chapter!

Lol! So cute! Been forever but that's alright. Glad you and your awesome story are back. :)

Love it. First two chapters pulled me in and would not let go! Your descriptions were perfect! Thank you so much for this writing!

Dear Maid Marian,

If you will go back and look at review by Honoria Granger it will tell you where the grammar needs improving in the first chapter. After that, well, things seemed to go forward very smoothly. I so enjoyed your story on a dreary December day when I have the flu. I will keep looking for new chapters. It's my favorite fic right now.

I have no plans to participate on this site, as I can't get on. Reason why? I forgot my stupid password and there is just no contacting these people that run this web site.

I have some wonderful stories, at least I think they are, hehe, but they will stay that, just mine. I now just like returning now and then to see all the talent ( and a lot of crap, let's face it) that makes it there about the Labyrinth.

People try, and you have to give them credit, but, holy guacomole, some of the grammar, some of the syntax, some of the takes themsevles, drive me batty.

Keep going, you are so talented. Thanks for PM me, but, as I told you I cannot PM you back as that would require my stupid password. I have no idea how you really reached me, or that anyone could from this site.

I studied the Sidhe in Ireland for several summers, visited fairy rings, hills, forts, climbed to the old places, many times, communed with nature, saw and learned a tremendous amount.

If you are intersted in the sidhe I suggest you check out my friend Michael Scott's works, or, my really good friend, Jim Fitzpatrick's paintings. They are both Irish published authors and Jim is the most beloved Irish painter of the day. He's also an old hippie and a hoot to get to know.

Sincerely, Lylabeth I

I really enjoyed these first chapters. I have been sick for a week with flu-like symptoms, it's the crude, so called, and I needed something to make me laugh. I love your goblins, and the bad guy here, makes Jareth as a vilian looks like a walk down ' cherry lane '. That thing, that he/she/it is really one bad beast! A scary beast! Not one I would want to meet! A Harry Potter, no, a Stephen King, worthy beast, ahhhhh, success.

Very, very convincing. A good chapter and your storytelling ability is great.

Good try, but your grammar is atrocious. Get a beta. Basic grammar is a must for most readers.

Não demore pra postar, queremos saber quem era aquela "sombra" sinistra perseguindo a Sarah! O que ela quer com a garota?

Só tenho uma coisa a dizer: mais!

Oh my goodness, this is getting good! It's even better now that it's so close to Christmas, I can think of it as an early present! Wonderful work, an take your time uploading. Heaven knows I'm terrible about rushing, so just relax! We'll wait for ya! ;)