it was fun while it lasted.

Awesome

wow. this was amazing. a pity it was discontinued

Great story. RIP

this story is very good.
realistic
it is sad that you stopped writing it.

Love this.

I REALLY love this story. Like, I'm in love with it. By FAR one of my favorites to ever exist.

This was an amazing story. What's with the reviews though? People are acting as if the author owes them something for spending dozens of hours providing free entertainment. That's just ridiculous, as is the notion that the story should be removed just because it won't be finished. Fanfiction is something people write on their spare time, so it's only natural some stories are never finished. I for one enjoyed every word of it, but if you really care that much about the ending that not getting one ruins the entire story for you, perhaps you should stick to already completed stories in the future - that completed stories only filter is there for a reason.

Such a shame it died. This was a very good fic.

You know, being a maiden does not strictly mean virgin. It can also simply mean a young girl. Since she can appear any age but technically doesn't actually age, this part of her oath is always fulfilled. So, she could interpret it that way and then she's free to get her freak on with Percy.

'AVENGE ME!' Lol!

I hate it when authors do this the lead their audience on then just stops and discontinues it a lot of authors do it to even if you lost interest in it you could have at least finished it or even deleted it instead of just disappointing anyone who reads it

What the hell? This story was actually really good and now you aren't continuing it? That is utter shit, you should be ashamed as now I have just wasted my time reading it as it won't be finished. Thanks a lot.

WHAT NOOOOOOOOOOOO OH COME ON ITS A GREAT STORYY WHYY

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!