I really like this.

It was great while it lasted. Plus, kathy an antagonist!? I cant see how that would’ve happened.

i think you should leave it up. it's like an archive for old things you wrote.

I'm so sad to see this story go. I loved the premise and could clearly see many different ways that Drew could positively or negatively affect the canon plot.

I was actually unsure what the point of Kathy's character was going to be at the end... So thanks for telling! It makes sense when I think about it. She could blame the voices for doing questionable things... And eventually lose her moral compass (if she even has one).

The scene with Drew unknowingly meeting L would have been AMAZING to read. It's hard to predict how L could react... But I feel like Watari would have liked Drew a lot.

Anyways, I'm just rambling. I loved the little bit you gave us and I'm sad to see this be discontinued. I hope to find something else to love in your other works.

Kathy- antagonist- what? kira obesessed maybe..?
oh man, i'd really like if it you left it up, then i can read it over again~ because i really like this story ya know? i understand your reason for discontinuing it though ;-;
oh um maybe how did drake and near get together in the end? xD
i'd really like to know the character's thoughts on Kathy being an antagonist though LOL
ah well uh.. i really enjoyed this story, and your writing really is a delight to read uuu
i'll be sure to check out your other stories though! I don't know if i did follow them or not yet hmm... ah well,, see ya!

I'd like to know more about how Kathy became an antagonist. If you don't mind sharing your abandoned plot points through PM that is :)

I'd really prefer it if this stays up. The front parts were neat. And I can totally empathize with losing motivation/interest in a story. It happens. Hope your inspiration has gone to re:vampred (because I'm pscyhed for the next chapter).

Thanks for the update

Wow this is quite good... please update the next chapter! Please please with a cherry on top!

Please more :)

NUUUUU! I NEED MOARRR!
This is so interesting omehgawsh! I really love how you made OC to become Mello's sister! And top 10? She's quite smart (though she is competing with people half her age, so I'm quite doubtful of it...even if they are geniuses)
Anyway, I loveeee this story and hope you can continue this!

This is so interesting ! I can't wait to see how Melli reacts to her standing up for near and how near will act . And I totally did not expect her roommate to have imaginary friends lol , I thought she was joking !

Oh dear, now Mello's going to hate Near even more, lol. "THAT JACKASS STOLE MY SISTER"

I will admit, I am not the biggest fan of Death Note, but I get the feeling this story has the potential to change that. I enjoyed these first three chapter immensely and Drew/Drake is a ver compelling OC. I look forward to seeing how her presence end up effecting things and how her outburst at Mello for bullying Near may change their relationship. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)

oh dear. i feel bad for near, but also a bit for mello too. that's gotta be rough. not to mention poor drake getting all the anger from him. can't wait to see what happens next though, so please update this soon! i just found it and i don't usually read death note fanfics that are near and mello focused, but i really enjoyed this one and am excited to see what happens next :)

Ooh I love this can't wait for the next chapter :)

He just appeared and I'm already shipping Near/Drew - Dear? - do damned hard XD