Wow didn't expect Kim to have fell so far

Why did shego jump straight to dv know their villians in their worlds ? Though honestly some if those marks are from joker but its not like she was just his punching bag

Are you dead?

awesome story man I already read this 5 times this will be my 6th time reading this I love it

Plz update or finish this. Good story needs end ing

I realize it's been over a year since you've updated but it's really awkward reading the later half of this chapter given that you get his name right at the beginning but insists on calling "Wayne" after the first mention

love the story

Unfortunately, this kinda plot about Global Justice doesn't make sense to me. Global Justice seems like it would be under the jurisdiction of the United Nations not just the USA. You'd need multiple nations to sign off on disbanding it.

It doesn’t matter at this point but I think Go four of them should go together

fantastic story so far i carnt wait for the next chapter to come out im lookin forwored to wat happens next keep it up

I stopped at chapter 6, Ron being drugged with no will got extremely boring real quick, as in it got boring when it was introduced when Ron showed back up drugged. I do not give a single damn if later on he isn’t drugged anymore and stop being treated like a slave, this got very boring and ridiculous and is an embarrassment to me as a dominant male. What a waste of a story and potential. Burn away.

You either need a beta, or you need to take some English classes. I'm not a grammar fanatic, but this is really bad. I skipped to the last chapter in the hope that you would have improved, but you still did not seem to understand many of the basics of English grammar and especially punctuation. You don't have to do it yourself, but at least get someone to proofread for you.

Glad to see another chapter also Ron's at piece with his inner self so that's a plus. I honestly have to say things are going to get very exciting...

Your writing has evolved tremendously since the first time you started this. I'm impressed!

Okay, i have started this fanfiction a long time ago and i really enjoy it. Your writing makes me want to read more and more of this story and even the crossover is well managed but i have some problems with how this chapter is constructed.
Especially the part about Kim. Because there is something that isn't even mentionned in here and that is that Ron is as much even more responsible of the situation than Kim. When they became friends, Kim didn't see herself as superior to Ron (they were kids) but Ron fell onto an inferiority complex by himself and this complex contributed greatly to feeding Kim's ego and creating the situation that you depicted. Kim didn't try to create this situation, Ron did and Kim merely kept it going because she's a kid that doesn't think that deep. And by the time she was old enough to think about this, this status quo was deeply engraved into their relationship, she didn't create it and probably wasn't even conscious of it.
By making (in Ron's mind) Kim being the villain and Ron being the victim it really is oversimplifying their relationship and how they arrived to this situation. Sure, Kim is part responsible of how Ron grew up to be what he was, but so is Ron responsible of how Kim grew up to be like this.
They both made each other's flaws even worse. Ron needed the help of three people that didn't care about anyone but him to see this and get out of this rotten cycle, and he did it. What help did Kim ever recieve to surpass her flaws? None, everyone (Parents, school, medias, Ron...) kept on building her ego leading to a situation where a model teenager lost sight of herself and her values. She should be considered as much of a victim as Ron, and yet when Ron finally "sees the truth" she is the villain, just like in 90% of the "Ron steps up" fanfics. On this point i am a bit disappointed and hope Ron's views on the matter will evolve.
It's sad your updates are so rare cause i really like this story.