sooo good

good storyline but you need to work on the grammar. love the story though

who is Azoc?

the line is if they will not talk, we'll make them squak.

omgs! I love it soooo much that was amazing! That ending had me crying though! I love Kili so much but at least now he won't be haunted by all the traumatic events he's been through

Well, I can honestly say I WAS expecting some one to...well the chapter title was a freaking giveaway! xD I'm not complaining. Great story. Will there be more?

Is this the end?

Back from holiday know HAI

AAAAUUUGGGGHHHHHHH! D: D:

Ummmm did azog break kili's fingers

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate

Dear Author, i hope this is not the end. I love this story. PLEASE continue!

The Chapters were well thought out. And i like that you incuded the structure of the outposts and stuff. However the emotion that you are trying to convey didn't come across as well as it should. It felt kinda distant and not so heart warming. Also there was some out of character moments with some of the characters, namely Thorin and Fili. Gandalf was the best portrayed. There are some grammatical errors. Also Azog's son is Blog, not Bog. But all in all it is going well so far.

And it just...

Ends :( *goes to room and sobs*

I read your story in the last two days and I liked it so much. Thranduil is such an ass. I hope they can safe Kili.
I can't wait for the next update!
There are spelling and grammar mistakes but I think that's normal because English isn't your native language. The story is still easy to read and to understand.