A shame to see this story was never finished, but it was an overall enjoyable read that I enjoyed from start to finish.

My biggest complaint would be a minor one in that using Dustin instead of Robin annoyed me a fair bit as I didn't see much of a point in not using the universal name.

Great story. I would very much like to see more.

Update!

Great chapter. I await the next update.

Yes! You have returned! Now please give us more chapters!

For a story 2 years old, I'm surprised by the low number of reviews and fav/follows you have. This is an excellent story so far. The characterization is concise and you don't spend an extraneous amount of time detailing events or characters that wouldn't be important to Lucina's tale (though the lack of Sumia and Cynthia is somewhat questionable, particularly the latter). This keeps your story relatively fresh. Keep up your good work, and I hope you manage to finish this story before another 2 years pass! :P

- Kyp

Okay,this is one of the best Fire Emblem Awakening find ever. Please continue it.

Almost an entire year...

Please, update it soon.

- Hammer

A very good story! I like it really much and is looking forward to the next chapter Keep up the good work!

The attentive to detail that is in the story makes this fanfic the best Fire Emblem fanfiction I have read so far. The mindset and thought process Lucina has is excellent, in character and doesn't feel forced. The romance seems justified, and the quirks given to Destin are pretty fun to read. I hope you are continuing this series, as it's very well done. I'm interested in seeing how the relationship between Lucina and Destin grows, as well as everything else.

This is an amazing story. Your characterization of Lucina is spot on and I love all the things you've added while still keeping to canon. There's really nothing else to say, except that the story is great and I dearly, dearly hope you haven't abandoned it.

Please update soon!

This is amazing. Really amazing. I am definitely following this. I like how you deviate from the game script and still make it canon. It's pretty awesome. Also I love the way you write Lucina. I think it's very believable. And AvatarXLucina is adorable. :)

Looking forward to more. :)

Amazing! The only problem I had was that it said Gerome gave Lucina the mask in a C support between the two

Awesome, an update! Totally worth the wait!

I do like the fact that you convey Lucina's tendency to be literal-minded and rational so convincingly, but her overwhelming self assurance feels odd at times. Eg: "Those were simple truths of who I was, and so was this. I couldn't deny it, but neither could I accept it." It makes for cut and dry reading, not much surprises there. Hope to see more uncertainty colour her narrative, especially when Morgan appears.

Conversely, your Avatar is the most interesting I've read so far since his motivations are a mystery and there is a touch of unpredictability that makes him edgy and dangerous. Nonetheless, looking forward to the next chapter!