Love love love your story. I want more soon.

I'm liking this introduction! Yes it's very good

More please, how does this end? Excellent writing

Update please soon

I love the way you write. You capture the characters perfectly. I can hear the voices of the actors as I read what they're saying. Bravo. More please!

Ahh! You HAVE to update!

I'll admit, I have never seen an episode of Justified. And by reading a few fics in this category I am very interested in watching the show, though Im sure I will be missing Melissa and Tim relationship.

But really. Update? Please? I need to know what happens next. Happy writing!

This is where I have to stop reading this story. I like the way Tim is written but I can't read another character calling Melissa perfect one more time. Too Mary Sue for me and I hope you take the criticism the right way way. But after reading that in every chapter I no longer care what happens to the character.

I sort of like this story the one thing that bugs me is the whole setup where you have all the other supporting characters talking about her all the time as if she is the center of their universe and to be honest it's a little odd to have her move into the Marshall's office. A little too convenient. I guess I feel this story has a little bit too much of the wish fulfillment properties going on. But I can relate to that a little.

My last review right now, but hopefully there are more chapters to follow? I promise to review them if they do appear! This ending bit where they both recognize the depth of their attraction despite their condensed time span felt both very realistic while allowing the romance to continue without necessarily putting the breaks on. I really do hope you continue this, but given how much great material you've given us, that's really up to you :) Thanks for 33 beautiful chapters, and good luck with future writing ventures!

Best argument scene ever - the mix of anger, passion, and frustration is palpable and so true to character that is really felt like I was watching a little movie in my head. Great characterization!

And this is why I hate Craig Duncan's lawyer, ugh, so unprofessional to bring up personal questions like that! Great way to really build the tension as we head into the face-to-face confrontation. It's not rushed which really makes the events in the following chapters at the more satisfying. I love the little details about Tim's protectiveness.

Figured I'd review every other chapter since I did so poorly remembering to review when these came out. The banter continues to be one of my favorite parts of this fic, and the quiet moments are just as lovely (if not more heartwarming) than the passionate cuts (though goodness knows I love those too). Great job with this chap!

I apologize for not reviewing earlier, goodness knows I read it the moment it came out (and loved every second of it, of course). I love that this chapter really shows them settling into this new 'normal' for them. The mutual respect that Tim has for Melissa's work and vice versa is such a strong point.

Hmmm.. office romances never turn out...high drama? Another very well done chapter!

Wonderful second chapter. I wasn't sure at first what her job was, but then you answered my question. Just love how you have captured Tim and I love Melissa. I really look forward to seeing their relationship develop. Your writing is a dream to read. Thanks again for all your hard work and talent.