When rewriting the stories make sure you indicate when they story is going to start if there happens to be an authors note before it. There have been quite a few stories of yours that I've read, for example "The start" Bill/Harry oneshot. You talk about it being halloween and wanting to make a post then all of a sudden it's the story your reading and not the authors note anymore. Maybe at the end of your authors note somehow indicate a line break so people know that the next paragraph is the beginning of the story. It could be asterisks ****** , it could be the date in which this story takes place, it could literally be the words line break, or it could be the title of the story in caps, bolded, and underlined.

no. ... just no you say teal way to much. and there are 101 other things wrong within the first chapter alone.

Thanks for the story.

Wow love it!

What the helll... did I just read ?

Loved it, but wish it was longer and the ending less rushed

Short but a good ending.m

interesting story :)

Harry X lúcios
Harry X fenir
Fred X Harry X George
Lúcios Harry X Draco

heehe short and sweet wrap up, though I would have liked to know more details on what happened that day. ;)

9414?

good

I enjoyed reading this story better than: Silk and Lace.

But that's just me...If any one whats a smut story read Silk and Lace.

Otherwise this one rocks better !

The Crimson Mage

insane genie XD that'd be hilarious lol

HOW THE FUDGE DID I MISS DUMBLEDORE JUST UP AND DYING?! (not that i'm complaining, i just now noticed it -.-)