Odang, cat's outta the bag, huh? I honestly didn't expect it

Well dang, surprised he figured it out on his own - and it was earlier than I expected too!

I love it I love it I love it and there's SO MANY CHAPTERS this is such a treat

Oooh, I like the premise!

I don't know if you'll even see this, whether you're still active on this site or not. I also can't remember if I've reviewed this story before, so forgive me if I repeat myself...

This is the third (or fourth?) time I've come back to read this story because of how incredible it is. Every time I read it, it never fails to make me laugh, cry, scowl and smile.

Just wanted to let you knowx

Thank you for sharing!

this was fantastic. thank you for your hard work in creating it. it's wonderful

Came back across this story and reread it all. Still love it; it's still perfect. Thanks for spending the energy and time writing this, AND especially for sharing it!

I just recently played Dragon Age and like many others I am totally enamored with Fenris. I have been a FF fanatic for years but never bothered to go outside my movies/tv shows stuff I read. I found your story and I have to say of all the ones I have read in this genre and others, you are brilliant! I hope your original novel has taken off in the literary world!

I found this last night. I perhaps slept about 4 hours, I have sat at work and read left all the housework to read and my boyfriend has been complaining the last 2 hours because I have been ignoring him to read. It was worth every second . Been on here 10 years already and I have never read anything as good as that. some have come close bit they were left incomplete. You should be published. Amazing

Hey, so, your story is amazing and your writing is phenomenal. I'm so glad you stuck it out and finished the story. I know just how hard it can be with life constantly throwing curve balls.

For instance, lately my health took a nose dive and it's been rough. I've been desperately trying to find a way to relax enough to sleep, and then I came across your story. It's so rich with character interaction and development, and DA2 is even my least favorite of the trilogy... I can't rightly remember how I came across this story of yours, hah! But I'm so glad I did. Truly. You had me laughing and crying, which was a very sweet release after holding it together for so long.

Thank you, dearly and deeply, from my heart. I appreciate the time and effort spent putting this story together, and I'm so glad you shared it.

Hello !

I read a few other fics these days and I have to say that yours really stand out. All of your characters are really deep, interesting and they feel real. I love how the emphasis isn't put on Hawke's beauty or body, but rather on her personnality (I can't read fics with the male character emphsaizing on his LI's legs, breasts and so on anymore), her relationship with Fenris is way better this way. Dare I say I spent half a night hping there would be a movie (or rather a tv serie) adaptation of your fic ? I would watch it without doubt.

I hope you continue writing, because your style is really, really good.

Hope to hear about you,

Mathilde

I absokutely loved the discussion on the roof, it feels so natural and perfect and everything! But even if I know why he's reacting like that, i can't help but ask myself WHY IS FENRIS SUCH AN IDIOT ? He's like, wow she's so beautiful, I feel so dizzy when she's around, or like i have a fever, i trust her so much and i want to spend my life with her, she's the best person ever and i care for her so much, is that...friendship ?

Seriously i just love it

Hello ! I just started reading your fic yesterday and I really like it. The writing is very smooth and I like that you skip fights most of the times (it would be waaaay too long then and I have really a hard time figuring out written fights '). I like your Hawke and her relationship with Bethany, and your insight on other characters too, none feels out of character.
I had a wide smile when stumbling on a lord of the rings reference (you rewrote a bit of the drinking song right ? I'm not sure about it but it seems like) (and the sprinter dwarves thing too)
To sum it up I love it and I hope you're doing well and that you continue writing because you're very good at it in my opinion.

Good job and have a nice december )

Mathilde

(I'm not very fluent in english sorry)

holy shit this was amazing... next time i read it, i will review individual chapters. couldn't stop, hot damn.