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Puh lease keep updating I love this story soo much!

I looooooove Martha Speaks! Please update soon

Keep going please! Its been so long!

hi i love chapter five i was wondering are going to update it soon it has been 4 months if you have lost interest in this story that is ok i have a suggestion let me know if you wanna hear it

great job update it cant wait to see what happens next

I love it

Great story so far just please try not to have a year gap in between chapters if you can hurts to wait that long

make another paragraph, you have not updated for a while

Not a review.
However, put some more romance!

Well, the suspense between Helen and T.D is building, almost as if it will be as explosive as a volcano. I am both excited and furious there is a cliffhanger. I am eager to read the next chapter. If you want to discuss it, go to Reddit and search for Martha Speaks. It is a new subreddit so all the fans can discuss the show.

Umm...wow...didn't think there was gonna be any deaths in these stories. But hey, it's really good, I couldn't of done better myself. Like the way you described the visual effects, the "edge of your seat" moments, Fantastic! Hope the 4th chapter is good as this one.

I think TD should invite Helen to the park to play ball with the dogs. Then the ice cream truck stops by (or the hot dog cart, cotton candy cart, etc.) Helen wants to buy something. TD offers to pay. Helen thanks him. TD smiles at her. When they're done eating, they play ball with the dogs. Martha overhears TD talking to himself about how much he likes Helen . They go home, and then Martha tells Skits about what she heard. Helen hears and the next day, Helen is extra nice to TD. I hope you can use that.

I must say that this is a very unique story you have going on here DisasterMovieGuy . Keep up the good work. And I do adore lemonheads !