Reviews for Naruto of the Homunculus
svenijsselsteijn chapter 17 . 3/15
more plz
Oakenshi chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
I send flames your way to roast those marshmallows for smores
koseta.a chapter 4 . 9/24/2019
This is.. It feels a bit rushed. Also he just tells his team mates all his secrets the second time they ask after saying clan secrets? Who would actually believe a child talking about meeting a super powerful godlike being right off the bat? What about the uzumaki clan? I don't think the Namikaze is even a clan...
god of all chapter 17 . 3/15/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
drivemaster9x chapter 17 . 2/8/2019
Nice
kazutoayoma chapter 17 . 1/18/2019
please update again
ShannTheMann256 chapter 17 . 12/14/2018
please update soon
10/10
Kain129 chapter 17 . 11/4/2018
great story really enjoyed it
EvenLoveLies chapter 17 . 10/13/2018
dang I wish there was more
Wicked.A chapter 1 . 9/10/2018
i like the idea, but this puts a limit on how strong naruto can get (if he is up against someone of madaras perfect susanoo level there is nothing he could do) also the uzumaki are a clan , also what would the counsel do with knowledge about him they can not replicate his homonculi abbility without a philosopher stone and there are no quantities of humans gathered in one place large enough to create a big one , they would also need transmutation circles and knowledge of physics , so the knowledge would not do them much good.
this was just my honest critique i am only at the first chapter and like the general idea so i will continue reading.
abdultahir38 chapter 4 . 8/22/2018
what's the point of a clan secret I'd he tells everyone
Zarathos' chain chapter 17 . 1/20/2018
Hope you update this story soon
tenshiakuma14 chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Seems like a great story but why did naruto abilities have to be exposed like that? Shouldn't it have been a little concealed? And it seem so rush since the first chapter. Honestly, what with sakura drastic personality? And sasuke? Already explain how they became friends. Anyway this is it for me.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
Or you could have him become the Uzumaki Clan Head. Seriously this first chapter is kinda shitty. There's no way Hiruzen would let Naruto take up his fathers name at this point. Maybe after the Chunin Exams but not now.
ethan.lukkar chapter 17 . 6/30/2017
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
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