| Reviews for The Imperfect One |
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   Phishouttawatta chapter 20 . 3/9/2016 I love Haldir's gift to her and his rapport but I start to not be so sympathetic toward her with the decisions she makes, what she thinks is the right way to do things. But maybe she is gonna be a bit more wise in the future? |
| Phishouttawatta chapter 7 . 3/9/2016 Oh come on...I seeeeee, I see where this is going. Elenmire has mortal lineage and has a brilliant light when she fights! Comeoooooon. I don't think it's Mary Sue that is the one to fulfill the prophecy |
| Phishouttawatta chapter 4 . 3/9/2016 It is so nice to see that Elenmire has support for Annaril and her brother. It must have kept her going during all those years of scrutiny |
| Phishouttawatta chapter 3 . 3/8/2016 HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH omg, I have NEVER seen someone so blatantly make fun of a Mary Sue otherwordly insert before, and it is FREAKING HILARIOUS! And honestly, really, really good. I didn't hate it at all. Is Mary Sue going to be the tenth rider or is Elenmire? maybe neither? Your writing is fantastic. I'm excited to read the next chapter! |
| Phishouttawatta chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 I'm really interested in this story! Prologue was pretty summarizing, but I'm assuming there will be more detailed accounts of the interactions she has with Arwen and the other elves :D very excited to have found an interesting story like this! |
| 1Deivle chapter 21 . 9/15/2013 this story is flippin amazing! I can not wait till there is another chapter posted! :D |
| 1Deivle chapter 17 . 9/15/2013 tip for boy hunting: talk about boy who is interested in you to another boy in a personal setting this will have both falling at your feet plus the one who is already the fiance thank you for this wonderful eye opening fact of life :) |
| bluedancingkittykat chapter 21 . 4/20/2013 I'm waiting. ;) |
| blastedcrow chapter 21 . 12/30/2012 This fic is amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue! |
| JoRyuken chapter 21 . 4/29/2012 This is the first lord of the rings fanfic I've read and it'll probably be the best I'll ever read. Everything flowed so well and you seamlessly woven your character into the actual story. I only hope you continue this story on a regular basis. I also look forward to what you have in store for El. I do hope you update soon. Honestly it does kind of suck having to reread an entire story to because you don't really remember it. |
| littledragoneyes chapter 21 . 8/12/2011 Wow, this story is really well-written. One of the better stories that I've read, and I have read a lot. Please continue it! I really hope you haven't abandoned it. Hmm. Has a bit too much drama of the boys falling for Elenmire thing but it's nice. And now that I think of it, Elenmire really is pretty selfish...in a good way? ish? Ah well, keep posting chapters! :D |
| PeetaPan45 chapter 3 . 1/30/2010 hahah! brilliant! stupid mary sue XD |
| ianthine.vesper chapter 21 . 1/3/2010 OMG! This is like the fifth time I've reread this story! It's just as good as the first time I read it. I really enjoy the way the characters interact with each other and the way you changed the group dynamics yet kept it so similar! I really hope that you finish this story! And put the next chapter out soon! |
| rieta chapter 1 . 10/15/2009 I LOVE this! Your use of language is fantastic and you've created a unique character... Thank you for a great read :) |
| Ingrid chapter 21 . 4/27/2008 She is one of the most selfish people I've ever heard of! Loving three men at the same time, while not knowing which of them she will choose! She stayed in a relationship with a man she didn't truly love! (their would-be children would've noticed, and Boromir would've too eventually) Tell Haldir that she will come back to him, and then can't even tell Legolas that she love someone else! What kind of woman would do something like this! It's insane and I don't like it! |
