| Reviews for Fertility Rites |
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Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 9/2/2015 Oh yeah, I bet Ed does want to now. XD Keep on Writin' and Rockin' |
GummyDrive chapter 1 . 7/17/2014 I can imagine stuff like these happening in Brotherhood or the manga. I mean, if Winry kisses Ed or something I can picture him not declining and all. But I digress, love this oneshot! |
Iaya R. White chapter 1 . 7/4/2014 Still confused on the tradition, but it works. lol You captured them perfectly. Good job! |
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 very good |
Lola Rogers chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 Loved it! awesome story! |
OstensiblyInsane chapter 1 . 11/6/2013 aaaaaaaaa I should have looked at the ratings... Nothing good would ever come from a story like this... |
mimibeebee chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 oh my goooooosh this was so cuuute! Wowowow this was so cute and so well writtin,everything was really in character ! This was great! |
paracuties chapter 1 . 6/2/2013 OMG HAHAHA I love how Winry always makes Ed change his mind about something. This is hilarious. I love these phrases, and I'm going to quote them: "Maybe it wasn't just residual embarrassment." "Ed was pretty sure he wasn't supposed to hear the 'Mommy' tacked onto the end of that statement, or maybe he was. Whichever it'd been, he'd shot Al an obscene Xingese gesture Ling had taught him, but Al knew it, too, and, if they'd not been at the dinner table at the time, a fight might've broken out." "Or Ling. God, if Ling was here, he'd – he'd grab all the eggs and hit every cute girl he could. And probably make sure Winry got soaked in perfume, so her dress went transparent and – Ed swallowed hard, trying to restrain his thoughts from what Winry's body might look like under that dress." Those parts were my favorite. :P Love it! |
Harryswoman chapter 1 . 5/14/2013 *blushes* Oh my! I still loved it! |
NonieBee chapter 1 . 5/13/2013 That was awesome! Brilliant consept! |
aaluvsart chapter 1 . 5/4/2013 god this was amazing |
fullmetalmeister chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 So good! I love your style of writing and the whole idea of Eostre. It would've been really funny if it ended with Pinako taking a picture of them kissing ;) but amazing overall |
le-loup-garou chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 This was great! |
cookiethewriter chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 I laughed so friggin' hard! Pinako and Al were working against Ed, holy god. xD This would be the best OVA holy crap, and I love how completely original this is. I never thought about Spring being a time to celebrate, in Pinako's terms, "f-cking". Way to be, Pinako. -Cookie- |
Narim chapter 1 . 4/2/2013 Can I say I simply adore the tradition presented in here and I think is better because as far as I have read your stories you make good cultural adaptations to the characters and that's awesome. And Edward being a grumpy dork is always welcome. Seriously your style is amazing, never stop writing. |