Reviews for Underneath the Underneath
EllaJuroku chapter 15 . 4/24/2019
May I know the name of the novel? Would love to be able to read it!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16/2019
I mean I like the idea of it but it seems a little extreme that everyones reaction was negative (except for Iruka and Gaara). I mean from the 13 people they told 11 reacted badly. That's a little over the top don't you think?
Make it more meaningful. By having less people react badly and put in more effort into making the few that are against them come around.
Maybe reading why Shikaku is disappointed with his son (clan heir, doesnt want to stay, doesnt want to fulfill his duty) would make sense. Instead of just having everyone randomly hate them.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2019
Naruto's hair had grown quiet a bit. His bangs were a lot longer but the left side was longer than the right. Naruto was also taller then Shikamaru. Shikamaru's hair was no longer in on pony tail, the bottom half was hanging down.

So like a rats tail?
Lunary chapter 15 . 11/4/2018
Hello,

just finished reading so far :)

Uhm will Naruto lose Kurama completly or will he only have to give up the Yin Chakra?

It would be sad to have him lose Kurama completly.

Anyway who knows if you continue this story or not :) but I hope you do.

Regards,
Lunary
armydancer01 chapter 15 . 9/21/2017
How's your novel going? Hope you haven't forgotten your other stories though
Melyway chapter 15 . 2/2/2017
Good luck with the new chapter with your fic.
Silver wolf chapter 14 . 10/21/2016
Please update!

I need to know what's going to happen next!
What's the solution to Naruto's problem?
Who where the ninja's that attack Naruto?!
Will Shikamaru's mother come around?!

These questions need to be answered!Please!
Venus914 chapter 3 . 4/5/2016
Really? That easy?

Im not gay but in my life, i always decide. For who i will be with, if i buy a car or a house, anything. I do not let others influence my choice or my decision.
magic in me chapter 14 . 11/1/2015
Ooh, I like. Please update when you can!
belladu57 chapter 14 . 10/7/2015
Very good
Guest chapter 14 . 10/3/2015
Awesome story so far. I LOVE IT! And Naruto better be alright. I swear, I will raise Hell if he dies or something terrible happens to him. Though Shikamaru will protect him, along with Tsunade. The others would too if they knew what was going on. Killer Bee would help out too if he was around.
kamui5 chapter 14 . 10/2/2015
Looking forward to reading more and who the new enemy is.
Melyway chapter 14 . 9/29/2015
Naruto can finally trust Shikamaru to find the solution. Can't wait what happens next.
TigrezzTail chapter 14 . 9/28/2015
Hm, so Kyuubi's chakra is finally killing Naruto? And yeah, it would be pretty hard to fulfill those requirements in such a short period of time.
Sassy618 chapter 14 . 9/28/2015
Glad you're back to writing this story! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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