Hey, I love how the fic is going, have you abandoned it?

*saaaaaaaaaaad*

Waaaaaaah! Such a great story! Why aren't you continuing this? I hope everything's okay?
I'd really really love to know what happens next because the plot seems so exitingly, so ... well, yeah, great. I love the story and I'd love you to continue. Are you planning on doing that? Are you even still active on ffnet? I surely do hope so!

what the fuck was the last part abt?

Iiii llooovvee tthiisss. It's so beautiful! So wonderful! So amazing! The plot so enticing! I can't wait for Luffy & Ace to meet ! I hope Ace doesn't feel betrayed by Luffy. Aaahhhh what's gonna haapppeennn?!

This story was really nice to read!
The way the Strawheads interacted with each other, the plot and Thatch hehe!
and well written too- I was laughing quite often while reading this. You really have a knack for this.
I hope you will continue this some day but thank you for uploading and sharing this anyways

I really loved your fic! Really looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Really liked your fic. Are you considering updating after so long?

Cool fic

Hey! Your story is very interesting and I really like they way you write One Piece characters here! Definitely looking forward to see what happens next! :))

More!

Absolutely love love loved this story! Can't wait for Ace and Luffy to meet *snicker* it'll be awesome! And will Luffy and his crew become pirates instead of marines? Excited for when Smokey will show up and ooh! What of Shanks? Will Luffy ever get his Straw Hat? And is Sabo alive? So many questions. So many awesome feels for this superb story, not enough chapters! It is simply stuff endous your writing style and I am in love! Pleas eupdate soon!

If you aren't ever going to update either delete or pass it on to someone who will update.

This is a good read. I love how you made Luffy and co. fit into the positions of marines so well without changing their core characteristics! :)

YESSS... BEST. MARINE!LUFFY. FIC. EVER.

Seriously, I love how you take the characters we all know and love and stick them in this marine base, while keeping their personalities true to form and backstories similar yet different enough for there to be MYSTERY and PLOT. Those Whitebeard pirates don't know what they've got themselves into. ;)

But really, what happened that was so traumatizing in Dressrosa? Why doesn't Ace know that Luffy's on base, or possibly even alive? What is Luffy's goal in even being a marine? Why was CP9 dispatched and what are they looking for, aside from Thatch? And sooo many more questions besides! :D

I still hold hope that one day the fires of inspiration might spring forth once again. But until that day, I shall reread this fic and analyze it in hopes of new insights. May your stories bring you as much joy in their writing as I had reading them.