Very good! So sweet

I enjoyed reading this. I loved the Sirus part haha

~Tori

So cute

I really enjoyed this fic! Thank you so much for sharing!

I understand completely what you meant about not feeling comfortable writing stuff like this. But we all like to read stuff like this, which, fortunately, is easier, as nobody has to know... :) I think you did a great job so far. It doesn't sound vulgar at all, since you capture so beautifully the vulerability and intimacy of the situation, and let us know what they are thinking. It's very believable, beside being sexy.

Awsomeness!

For a story that was written long before Harry Potter was finished, you did a great job with these characters. This is a really beautiful story and you have nothing to be embarrassed about. Great job! I just wish you were still writing :-/

Lovely, sexy, and very sweet. Thanks for sharing!

loved it

Such a great story and the ending was perfect ;) I'm glad they had their happy ending.

This is a fantastic story. Gods, they just can't catch a break, haha :( it's brilliantly written and soooo hot! I'm dying to read the final chapter, bloody Sirius had better make himself scarce and soon!

Wow! Fantastic story.

I think you nailed it!

I loved the ending!

Good fic!