| Reviews for The Next Generation |
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Nightscream chapter 36 . 10/6/2018 I'd like to see the full cover image. but the link you gave is incomplete and you didn't name the name of your artist friend. |
Brian Awesome chapter 25 . 3/30/2017 I am surprised that the Supreme Kai didnt restore 16's arm.. |
Brian Awesome chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 ... It kinda sucks that King Yemma only gave Gohan a body that still only has one arm.. |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/22/2016 your training sessions are stupid as hell. there is no way they are getting that much stronger in just a few sessions. |
WolfShadow96 chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 I think trunks should be stronger because if you remember the androids in this timeline are weaker than the main timeline so at this level trunks would have still been destroyed by them and even potentially these ones if they teamed up. |
Mysteec chapter 56 . 3/11/2015 Broly, has become my favorite, character in this story. Some of his lines made me think of TeamFourStar: the moment I read them, I knew they would stick in my head as the most badass lines he will say, lol. WHATEVER, I'M FREE BITCHES! something something, BECAUSE I'M THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAIYAN, BITCH, and another I can't recall right off, but who cares? lol. Then poor Tarble having a hard time escaping with another prisoner giving him a difficult time and Broly had to come rescue his ass. I died. I like Tien's daughter personally, but many people seem to forget that this is Future Trunks' timeline, not the current one that we know and love/hate. This is easily one of the better fics on ff, and though Broly and Kaisa's co-existence is a tad hard to swallow for some, I let it slide for the fact that this is not the primary timeline, and things can happen differently depending on circumstances of this particular universe. Having Cooler in there was a nice touch, but I wonder how Zyara knows Bulma? She is either an orphan of non-human origin and for whatever reason was raised on Earth, or she is an alternative version of a current Z-fighter (that exists, or did exist in F. Trunks timeline and/or the present one) that went on to become her universe's God of Destruction. Ooh, I hope you update this again soon. The suspense is killing mee. |
DrawingFlowers chapter 56 . 2/23/2015 This was an amazing story, I hope you finish it |
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 21 . 10/26/2014 Your power level states don't make sense - Goku would get stronger than a Super Saiyan 3 by going Kaioken x10 in his baseform. Yet, when in Frieza Saga - Goku went kaioken x30 and still could not match Frieza. So your power level chart is inaccurate - I understand it's not meant to be totally accurate and only show who's stronger then who but It's kind of ridiculous when the power up from going Super Saiyan is less than a 50% increase in power whereas in canon it is a 50x increase. If the Kaioken was non existent or worked differently I'd understand. but here you reintroduced it and pan's power level indeed went up by 10x whereas If she went super Saiyan 3 her power level would've been 34 million at most according to your chart... Confusing man. |
Kia chapter 56 . 8/8/2014 This is a really intriguing story I really hope you continue to finish writing this soon it truly is fascinating! Please don't stop ! |
Astroman1000 chapter 56 . 7/24/2014 LOL TH E GOTENKS GOHANKS relapse was funny but ive caught up and am very impressed by your story i love it and cant wait for the rest of the chapters :D |
aFanAddict chapter 56 . 5/28/2014 Oh this is gonna be hell! I can't wait for the next update |
aFanAddict chapter 52 . 5/28/2014 He's hinting at fusion that lil sneaky Gohan. Gohunks (haha) is coming! :D |
aFanAddict chapter 44 . 5/27/2014 A god of destruction?! Ffffff |
aFanAddict chapter 39 . 5/27/2014 I don't think babidi is dead due to Tarble still being majin. It's odd about Dabura's spit, but I know for a fact this magic couldn't last if he was dead. I haven't read in a while so I can't remember |
aFanAddict chapter 19 . 5/26/2014 I noticed a random inconsistency as I reread this chapter. Trunks transformed into a super Saiyan God. But in BoG they had already met Tarble at that point. But in this story, they didn't meet Tarble yet... I'm confused... \ |