Well that was moderately entertaining - not particularly good but entertaining.

This is so amazing

I like it better than the first

I think this story was very good. Many grammar errors, but American English may not be your first language.

It was still a great story.

Keep writing as life allows

I realized I forgot the R in Scorpius's name. AWWWEE So cute Draco was asking permission but Lily and James have already said "Yes". Haha pregnant again Harry, well at least this pregnancy will be a lot safer. How cute, he'sgoing to habe a baby girl. What a sweet sweet way to end the story.

This series was AMAZING I really loved it! Love how you written Draco and Harry. I really love how you incorporated the founders of Hogwarts and Harry and Draco's magical pets.

Man I would be saying the exact same thing if I got told that, so I cant blame him for reacting the way he is. Awwe the baby is thinking about Harry and Draco. Well damn Draco has grown up, though I knew that already it's definitely nice to see him making peace with Hermione. YAAY Scopius is born

Yes, Dumbledork is defeated. Oh shit Draco, Harry!?

Haha I love Mara! They all obviously know what Harry and Draco has been up too.

I knew it was Dumbledork! Good thing Lily and James are protecting Harry. I teared up a bit as they hugged and talked a little.

What is making Harry sleep walk? Dumbledork? Oh no Ruby didnt get to him in time

Oh no Harry and the baby! Oh I hope they find Remus soon to check the baby. Oh thank GOD Dumbledork isn't there, it's just an illusion from a trap. Awesome everyone found each other and they all found Helga

NOOOO HARRY! This is bad Dumbledork is there!

Man another fight. Harry is quite stubborn. Oh shit Sirius, Harry!

Well that went well. How cute Harry is having a baby boy! Damn Garin went for the kill... A graveyard...

Awwwe the present they got for each other is the most sweetest things! Ohh Hermione wants to talk now...