Such a unique story. I dont think ive ever read one were bella actually died. I love sunny so much. It took me a few chapters to get used to the accent. Its not often you actually get a main oc having one but i can almost hear it when i read her, i’d like to see more of this!

I know this is a Jake Imprint story but you’re really making me lean towards Paul. I came here for Jake and now my heart is wrapped up in Paul.

I’m confused on the summary for this story. There is no accent in it, so is the person speaking not Sunny?

I’m already very intrigued with this story! I loved her introduction and the tie in with Claire. I think it was an interesting decision to write in an accent. If I’m being honest, I wish you didn’t. I find it often is distracting if you make it to obvious and I skip over lines if I read too many at a time. I hope it isn’t as intense the rest of the story like it is when she’s entertaining the children.

is there going to be a Sunny/Bella showdown

42. Chapter Sunny's Sickest
Then too late ALIEN RATLESNAAKES AATTACKED Moria haedest with the PPacked with her own failiy with Lioly Volturi who turned you tell us then KILLED Sunny was with Child dying preparing for death then MURDERD Her the seer did found her then Sunny was a vicious newborn then with the Army created hissinbg then you Sie for crimes turned with the former best frien her screams was heaed with the Cullens MURDERED With both kids then took lives heads good they are dead then too late with both she died birthing hybrid kids viciously good is made a Vampire Slayer forbidden to imprint you broke law ATOMIZED! But too late her death was a legacy ALICE I CAN'T STOP THE BLEEDING She is pregnant again dying with hybrids bitten her alive then ASHES! Was hallowed out corpses good then took that from here they murdered them then suddenly humans mourned losses then Sunny was Turning from venom so Lillian with Msson agfge too fastest stopped with her kids made her weaken frail was dying from Venom childbirth death died here with them killed blew apart with pack then too late stolen from here then Alice Wait Sunny SUNNY CARLISLE! Then too late BIT Her hardest with them changed her into a True Vampire slayer now they returned herself had a planet power to escape CRACKED Good destroyed with the them viciously died bound as ghosts with both dead with both brought here without them killed now Sunny/them with witnesses nuked from then with the kids were teenagers Alice Bella Yes meet them new members who did to us/them Volturi Sunny now spoken American with a Irish twang gasp then they now hunted while wearing bodysuits then wearing as all of from home then PIERCED/Torn impaled no longer alive bring them they died here suddenly they became immortal beings/mazillions then most as all of animals drained then were sliced they aboard were as all of them but things were in as all of quarters then EXPLODED! Too late with both families both fusion DESTROYED! Good were as all of frozen but Pets are extinct that Vampires were in fact in to homes now trapped here cut from them they now were resurrected as Kindred and Galactic Lycans cloaked now Freed bought here good deceased then too late as all of them young/youth as all of the more Vampires adopted them then now overused then as all of resources suddenly bodies buried at holiest grounds good they are dead then more as all of them on Vulcan dead drained of blood as all that they did ripped as all of them from here as all of them heads with bodies Alice she needs to hunt so her with them then too late came no longer themselves that too late IMPALED! Bought here we bring as all of them dead of this crime they are deceased Sunny is gone with them good they are dead from here bombed with both time split with us/all that was it the other both with as all with more nuked within with as all colliding then too late EXPLOSION! Then too late nothingness was left bought as all of then their Vegetarian selves as all of them but their Carnivorous selves ruled the Cosmos forever then nuked were not humans at all of them stolen looks/voices/powers/ablities declared themselves overlords good our other selves are animal drinkers are nuked with as all of them now go then too late they declared them outcasts/exiles.

Please update! I previously read the story about Leah and Moira and it was a big surprise to learn that you were the author and that she was in this story. I really want to see how things turn out for Sunny's family and if the twins are staying but the adults leaving for the bar. Please please please update!

Hey! I adore your story so much. May I ask, are you still continuing it? I want to know about the relationship developement between Moira and Paul for example. Your writing style is beautifully done. Hope you didn't give up and looking forward to maaaaayyyyybeeeee the next chapter? Please?

I know it's been awhile, but please update soon!

Please update

OMFG PLEASE MAKE A PAUL AND SUNNY REMAKE.
I TOTALLY SHIP THEM

This story I cough... Because it get me laughing too hard! Hahaha... I really hope you haven't given up on this story because I sure haven't!

I fucking love the Dropkick Murphys! :D :D :D

this is good please update

I love the oc Sunny! I'm cracking up. I'm Irish so I can apreciate the characters personality. Keep up the good work!