Wow, I Love seeing Toni so submissive

Great story

Can you make one where it's of when Alfred meets the 'pet', that would so freaking awesome

Did you use google translate for the Spanish? I'm not trying to sound rude but where I come from, 'me da igual' translates 'it's all the same to me'

*dies from immense blood loss* That was aamazing! **

awesome! it was hard reading this in a hotel room with my fame ly without smiling...

There's onlyy one thing which angers me beyond belief - this story isn't faved much - damn u readers who won't read this extremely hot fic!

The ending was so cute...

This was HELL OF A SEXY fic. HOT. SCORCHING HOT! Thank you for such a lovely fic! :9

I like this. I was a but hesitant on reading it but it was actually really good :)

WoW _ you just blew my mind...I absolutely LOVED this story and I loved that you have made Spain more into his passionate side since he is the country of passion!
I also adored Arthur since that seemed to be his personality when he ruled the seas:)
Nicely done with the translations and it is well structured.
I also laughed when Arthur was telling young Alfred about the "pet" that he had but couldn't meet ;D
I loved this pairing and I loved this story...good job it was wonderful and creative!

Me gusta That was a lot of fun to read, keep up the good work

This was interesting but slightly confusing. Were they roleplaying or does Arthur really treat him like that? Also, I think it would've been better if they were just humans since having them be countries seems more insulting to Spaniards (especially since contrary to what Hetalia led people to believe, Spain gets revenge for the loss of his armada when he beat England's Counter Armada the very next year and still wins many other battles against England). So...yeah. I expected Spain to be much more aggressive. Still...it was a nice, smutty, darker fic...only I wish Spain was more in character. He's a fighter too after all.