Yo great job. It can get hard sometimes to write. Keep on swirling that quill.

Too many time skips

Never feel limited by the imagination of others, no matter how they may respond to your craft. Do not allow yourself or your creations to be redefined or cowed by conventions or the trappings of that which is 'acceptable' and average. Only be ashamed of what you write if it is done so with your own disinterest, for when you lack respect for your composition it will likewise fester in inane inadaquacy. While only you can disuade yourself from your seeming lack of complete comfort in writing smut, I feel you should still be proud of your ability to transform word into image. I wish I had at least half your talent. Everytime I try to write something I find myself repeating adjectives thrice a paragraph. :P Anyway, keep up the good fight. Cheers.

Yours is interesting! Reminds me of Sausagelink43-san!

really good

Damn son

Can you make a chapter 3

A great premise that is backed up with great writing, nicely done!

DAMN!
THIS is EXTREMELY hot!

i laughed threw the hole thing its wierd i didnt laugh during terminator sex seans

That was one of the best stories i heard. I hope u write another one.

It's a shame that while there does exist Midna,Pirncess Zelda and Link threesome lemons I have yet to see any artists pick up on this idea and make some wonderful threesome hentai of them.

Anyways to get back on topic,Link is the man being able to bed both princesses. You have quite the talent to writing such an amazing and engaging lemon.

I especially love it when both women start touching,kissing and pleasuring one another while the guy takes care of their needs like a boss.

So then is this it? You will not continue their adventures in the bedroom? If not at least Link,Zelda and Midna went out with a bang.

do you think midna, link, and zelda would agree to a foursome with me?
it would be much more entertaining and dirty. two guys, two girls, 1000 words, one night, epic sex.
me x link, me x midna, me slightly x zelda, zelda x midna, me x midna, link x midna, link x zelda, me x my self. totally awesome. xxxxxxxx rating. plaese make it. my name is alex. cast me as...a guard.
have everyone get their brains fucked out.

I got to say it is a good story I hope it make the 10

heh...I can honestly and proudly say I one-uped your link...why jack off to them against each other making out...when you can have them put their pussys flat against each other then thrust between them perfectly! When the climax cums, a wonderful paintjob across their stomach and the bottom of their breasts...if it shoots good enough,it makes it past the cleavage and they can lick each other off.