| Reviews for Zero Art Online |
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BlankMask chapter 3 . 6/12 This is so good I come back and read this every couple of month when I start to get irritated with the lack of good writing in fanfics so kudos to you. Also this is beautifully written. |
Kamerad Hans chapter 3 . 3/10 This is such a simple yet beautiful story. There are no surprises when you know the formula for these kinds of stories, so maybe I'm just a sucker for poetic endings and reverse-summons. |
Mernom chapter 3 . 1/3 There is an art in telling a good short story. Making it Xpload In size is a brute force approach, but making all the necessary things fit into a small package takes skill. I would certainly appreciate a longer story, but I can also appreciate the skill required to write a short one that's this good. |
Mernom chapter 2 . 1/3 What if Zero went after Klein sooner... And then Strea showed up? |
Mernom chapter 1 . 1/3 Very good. Louise referring to herself with her username after the time skip is a subtle, but powerful tool that helps to show her changed mindset. Having Silica be the one spending time with the Black Cats is an interesting move, I like it. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2019 gracias. |
Touya-san chapter 3 . 8/30/2019 Mierda que buena historia |
setokayba2n chapter 3 . 8/24/2019 A little sad... I could think that 'Zero' lives in Alfheim and Gun Gale could be good, maybe mixing her world with the Fourth Arc [I sincerely don't know too much about the fourth arc] Too bad they will never meet again, even if I wonder what could happened if Zero tried to 'Summon' again... Could she summon Klein? Could she summon herself somewhere? |
Tyracus chapter 3 . 8/15/2019 Short, sweet, and an ending that tugs the heartstrings of all those who look for happy endings. I wonder how Louise dealt with the transition to a new world, getting an identity (good to know someone who canonically can hack the citizenship registry), and learning about her new home. And maybe, just maybe, a little bit of magic will make it across and Yui may meet her Aunts, grandparents, and the rest of her family properly. |
Fencer22 chapter 3 . 8/14/2019 Ok. That was perfect. Nicely done :) |
Gremlin Jack chapter 3 . 4/24/2019 This was adorable and amazing and made me very happy to read it. |
Brenden1k chapter 3 . 12/23/2018 We need a sequel and or a side story. This is gold. I understand if you cannot write more of this ambrosia. |
Absque Zer0 chapter 3 . 12/9/2018 amazing fic. just goes to show that one doesn't need 1 million words to make a good work. |
Trscroggs chapter 3 . 11/8/2018 I still love this story, its one of the better Zero tales out there. |
MysticSpider chapter 3 . 10/10/2018 This was some good shit, I applaud your skill in writing. clap. clap. |