Man but this story was so fucking awesome

Please continue! I really love this and really would loe another chapterrr!

WOW this is really good ...pls continue

I am so thoroughly enjoying this! By any chance, do you watch Supernatural? Because, and it may just be my overtired brain at the moment, but I'm sensing a bit of influence. Really good influence. I like it, though I am slightly confused with the whole Rachel thing. Meh. Still more to read! Keep it up :)

I was supposed to review long ago, but well... I get too lazy at times.
This is a really good story. Love this dark sense of humor. I usually don't like first person narratives, unless the person is a sarcastic little bastard like Percy here. Awesome, keep it up.

I like it.

When are you going to update this awesome unique story because it something new and fresh so hurry up and update.

Great story man but update a little faster but other than that damn this story is good.

nice ahhah this is good

Wow! This is a really interesting story! I Can't wait to read more!

This is an artfully told story! I am thoroughly enjoying it. Please keep updating!

Great chapter! I clapping for you! And croissants, cause they taste good. Hey! Don't look at me. You asked for elaborate reviews and I did say they may be random and that's pretty much all I've been thinking about at the moment because I just had croissants for breakfast. Completely healthy, I know. My nutritious eating never ceases to amaze my mother. Anyway, update for the hypocrite of telling people to update! :D

Poor Percy. Love the humour though.

Love the dark humour. It's amusing. Say, have you ever read the Bartimaeus trilogy? Try them sometime if you haven't already. They're packed with dark humour, brilliant sarcasm, witty footnotes, hilarious come-backs and a genius shape-shifting djinni by the name of Bartimaeus. Who would've guessed? :P Anyway, update soon!

Very cool, keep up the good work! Looking forward to more of the story!