Pretty good. A lot of good grammar and chemistry. You should do more like this.

This was delightful, passionate, and wonderfully in-character. Thanks for sharing.

I don't even like Miriel much in the game, but this is one heck of an amazing story. You nailed this language-wise, atmospherically, character-wise... wow.

Lol Miriel is so cute. Great story I really liked it! I wish there was a same-sex option. I totally ship SeveraxNoire, SeveraxCynthia, and PannexCordelia.

This is amazing. I had never even considered Sully and Miriel together but this was both IC and a lot of fun. Many kudos to you.

I was so hoping I wasn't the only one thinking of this during their support convos.
They really should have let homosexual relationships in the game... It would have been awesome.
Anyways, thanks for writing this. It was great. I loved it!
Hope to see more from you soon.