You did a great present-tense narration! It flowed nicely in a third person pov.
As for the content... damn, being the only person getting closer to a loner more often than not ends badly -especially when one-sided feelings bloom along the line :c
I totally appreciate the fact that your Lovi didn't snap or get bitter over not being the object of Toni's affections, though -that's true love: putting your loved one's happiness above your own.

How dare Antonio do that? I know its only a fanfiction but, it hurts, you know? He spend more time with Lovina and he suddenly got a girlfriend. Im not going to have a boyfriend in my entire life like that not ever , I rather be single than to be broken.

Back to my review: This fic is just so AWESOME. Dont mind my blabbering above, you can feel me if you're a die hard fan of SpaMano especially with Fem!Romano. Hehe

Whaaaa! So sad but it's so good, too T_T

Aw, poor Lovina. Stupid Antonio.

1). This literally broke my heart reading it... I love Spamano, written any way, any plot, any AU, basically ANYTHING. This was beautiful. 2). I never really tried writing Lovi as a girl before. My girls for my high school AU are Canada (Margo Williams, and PruCan), and Japan (Sakura Honda, with AmeriPan). Because while Hetalia ships are life, I can only take so much yaoi for one fandom XD. Lovi was written very heartfelt: his/her (whatever lol) kickass nobody-cares personality, yet with just that small-but-indeniable amounts of emotion, of weakness. That needs to be shown more I think. 3). I love writing in present tense like this! It's sometimes annoying because I'll go back and forth between tenses (which is really bad, I know). But I tend to write like this. This time it added a lot more of the angst because it made me as the reader feel actually there.

Wow i feel like this review was written really seriously. sorry (?). I loved it though. Keep up the amazing angst-y spamano work friend! :D

Oh. Well. I really need a feelsy sequel to this where Lovina and Antonio drift apart and one night Antonio comes crying at Lovina's doorstep because Bella broke up with him. And then Lovina let's him in and is feeling conflicted because part of her still loves him and wants to comfort him but the other part hates him for putting her through this. Then Lovina accidentally confesses once Antonio starts moping saying that nobody loves him or something and they kiss. (I reaaaalllllyyyy want you to write this, and if you do you can choose whether it's heartbreaking or fluffy. But I really need this. It's okay if you don't write it though!)

I did exactly what the title said: I dared not to cry. For like ten seconds... ;-; Amazing!

This is so sad...poor Lovina :(

This is really cool! u even though this is a one-shot I want it to be a series!

I feel sad for Lovina but anyways, good story.

LOVIIIIII! NOOOO! SADNESS! CONFESS! NOW!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... wow... that's all i can muster out right now.. Why?! TT
anyways, I loved this :D

Oh my fish chips. RIGHT IN THE FEELS. I NEED A MOMENT.

Okay. That was beautiful. I loved everything: the cliche yet classic storyline; the flowing, flawless writing; and the heart wrenching pain... AH YES, THE PAIN... now and then I need a break from all the fluff. This was perfect!

Anyway, lovely story and keep up the great work! \(n_n)/

I love it 3 But..but, poor Lovina D:

Hmm, i'm not sure about your old writing style. But this, it all flows really well, i didn't catch any huge mistakes, so Good Job :D

You just stabbed my heart with a shard of glass . . . Good job! -In a weird sort of way . . .

Don't worry Lovi, you'll find love, maybe not with Antonio but with someone else.

One heartbreak closer to the One, and you are noble for being happy for him at the cost of your happiness.:)