Hot! Love the details *wink *wink

Woaaaaaaah! That's the first time I see in SS fanfic someone actually used the idea of bringing clone (in this case playboy Sauce xdd) for sex! Good job Author-san! Good job! *all thumbs up* xdd

This is an interesting lemon that really conveys that lemony mood. I like how Sasuke ambiguously said "felt the need to test chakra strings on my enemy" at the end. I think you might've been related to when Sakura's "string" was about to snap, or that Sasuke was actually attacking them without them knowing. Very good one-shot!

That was hot! Can you write two Sakuras this time?

I loovveee it one of the best lemon stories I've read so far keep it up

good lemon but whats the last line mean?

WHATTTT!? O_O
HOT DA*N! YOU UCHIHA BRAT! XwX

I LOVED IT! :D It's random and I love it. ;D
Great job on writing it. :)

I lovee it! This was hot and one of the few smut stories that I think is good and have come to like
But...can you please explain to me what the last sentence ment? Please.
Also, keep up the great work :)
-J.J

There should be more SasukexSakuraxRTN!Sasuke out there.

Whether it's smut or just in general, that mental picture is entertaining. Sasuke fighting over Sakura with ...Sasuke. Ha, Sakura will always have Sasuke's attention, alternate universe or not.

I don't normally comment on smut such as this, but this was hott- like, holy hanna. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO!

Because it is wonderful :)

The only threesome I'm completely okay with. Hahahhaha! Well, that or two Sakura's and a Sasuke. :P No but seriously, this is a really nice piece. Very detailed and pretty well written, it's easy to get caught up in the story and feel the mood. You portrayed the two very different Sasuke's very well, and I especially loved that bit of jealousy on original!Sasuke at the end. Kind of funny how Sakura dealt with them both.

Anyway, really good work! :)

Great fic! Thanks for sharing it with us.

good favorit part was when sasuke (from the Road To The Ninja) said to the other sasuke (the one from sakuras world) said "You may look like me, but we're nothing alike. Strange." A sinful smirk played onto his features, "yet there's one thing we do agree on: We don't like to share Sakura-chan."its seems both sasukes will always think sakura as their going to be a second chapter because i was wondering how the other sasuke (RTN)will get back to his world?i think it would have been funny if sasuke (RTN)went back to his world and found sakura was on a date since he was about to go on a their be a 3 chapter to Spar?beacuse i like Spar the best.

W-wait, was the RTN Sasuke with his evil present self? Whoa, was not expecting that. It was quite interesting though. And I like it so yeah. And I get the end too, naughty Sasuke *smirk*

I'm confused. What happened?

And what did he mean by "Felt the need to test chakra strings on my enemy"?

Interesting story though.

Omg i cant believe that the person who wrote one of my favorite jakesherry fics also wrote sasusaku fics-*squeals* keep writing! Youre ao awesome!