Love this!

Sweet loved it

Ooohhh. I've read this story repeatedly, and it just doesn't get old! \(/)\ Write more please! (_)

ERMAGHERD! AMAZE

I Believe That Petunia Deserved It...

Awwwwwww...such a cute story!

LOVED THIS! Write another!

I love this. I like the way it kind of shows why Petunia doesn't like the Wizarding World

Aww. She's still a bitch

Hey, I really liked this. I think you captured a different perspective of Petunia that you don't normally see. Although she still thought Lily was a freak (and I thought it was good that she [Petunia] had more hatred for her sister because of her jealousy). I thought you did a nice job describing Petunia's jealousy that her parents liked James, and her bitterness towards Lily. I thought you did a great job, I look forward to seeing more from you :)

Awesome story. Loved it a lot! good job :-)

Hi,

I enjoyed this. I thought you did a great job of capturing Petunia's voice and her bitterness and jealousy toward Lily. I thought you had just the right amount of sarcasm, and I like how you worked in Petunia's hurting when she compares Vernon to Lily's boyfriend before she meets him. Beneath her bravado, even she doesn't sound entirely convinced that her boyfriend is better. Nice work!

One thing I would recommend for your next story is that you not stick author's notes in the middle of the story, since it interrupts the flow of the narrative, and it weakens your characters' voices. It's understood that your characters have their own opinions that aren't necessarily the same as the author's. And again, you did such a fantastic job getting into Petunia's head that it doesn't really seem fair to interrupt her.

On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (www. rmimagic .com). From this story it looks like you'd fit in wonderfully with the other creative writers there, and I think they need a staff member too. You should definitely take a look. :)

Cheers,
Julia

Awwwww... FLUFF! Omg so adorable!