Reviews for First Times
plus ultra chapter 27 . 9/17/2019
You have done a superior job of providing this story. I would read anything else you've written becos you have such a dab touch with the unspoken part of this story. You didn't parrot the plot you embellished the narrative to expand the little glances, the subtle leaning. You made the beloveds real off this flat page with squiggley lines. Ya done way good and it was my privilege to read such well done work.
Guest chapter 27 . 12/28/2018
Hey so I finally started watching TWD and this has got to be my favorite Caryl fic ever. Like, this could have easily been a series of unconnected oneshots, but instead it’s a gorgeous series of connected, switching pov amazingness. Thank you for writing. I’m in love with these characters and you’ve written them so well!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/17/2018
This is one of the most beautiful Caryl stories I’ve ever read. I have come back to re-read this numerous times and this is my favorite chapter.
LD chapter 27 . 5/26/2018
Makes me sad to get to the end of a great story to find it abandoned:( I hope you come back & finish it but if not it’s an excellent story and I really liked it just wish it wasn’t abandoned...
Maude Lee chapter 27 . 8/6/2016
I had read this before, a long time ago. I'm introducing a friend to fanfiction, having successfully gotten her hooked on WD & figured now would be a good time to tell you I like your writing & this is one of the stories I'm suggesting to her.
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 27 . 2/16/2016
Awwwwwwww... p!
Well I have enjoyed this. Sorry their firsts didn't get them to the stage they could admit it. I am hopeful you have some other stories!
Thanks for the ride till now!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 26 . 2/16/2016
Slightly concerned about you A/n and the fact there is only on more chapter and lots more story to tell (firsts). But I completely have my fingers crossed!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 23 . 2/16/2016
Ouch again. Oh ouch! *weep*
But I love angst so this is right up my street!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 20 . 2/16/2016
Ouch! Great great but ouch!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 16 . 2/16/2016
Lovely! I so continue to enjoy these firsts! So glad I discovered your writing on here. I was reading a little story that I like and decided to check out the authors favourite authors. It's usually a good way for me to find something new to enjoy!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 12 . 2/16/2016
Love that he was able to encourage her just with his look. Love their silent communication!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 10 . 2/15/2016
We're good... Daryl Dixon speak for I love you? Lol! My husband thinks 'fine' is a compliment so I understand the language ;-)
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 9 . 2/15/2016
Sweet! Love the slow build. The caution and all the firsts!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 8 . 2/15/2016
Intense and so very good!
NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 6 . 2/15/2016
Such an emotional moment. Very well done!
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