Reviews for A New Chosen One
Jose19 chapter 14 . 10/1
Harry is walking the same path as Anakin because he can easily be turned into a Sith.

Palpatine used the Dark side to manipulate the visions of Anakin relating to Padmé showing that she was going to die.

Harry looks easier to turn than Anakin, and what happened to his magical power.
Jose19 chapter 12 . 10/1
Maul was made to look tougher than what he seems because Kenobi beat him in that duel that killed his master are you implying that Harry is inferior to him.
Jose19 chapter 6 . 10/1
The romance is building too fast because the consequences are horrible if found out.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 10/1
Anakin is the person to destroy the Jedi if Harry takes his place the Sith will concentrate on him.
Sammyboy94 chapter 16 . 9/19
Love it!
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 16 . 6/29
Come on Harry, follow the wisdom of you mother in her letter and "Foolow your heart, don't be afraid of the consequences." Also follow the Old Code and not the New Code which you grew with. That will also help, maybe be like Master Revan and find balance. Just don't fall to the Sith side doing it.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 11 . 6/29
I hope Harry finds the Old Code instead of the New Code that the Jedi Teach. If he follows the Old Code he can love.
a.vago chapter 1 . 6/4
I am sorry for this criticism:
I do not know, what is more depressing: a prophecy or counting “midi-chlorian”...
Neither one sounds promising.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/25
Will u update for a new chapter pla
Guest chapter 16 . 5/18
Good story, wish it would be continued.
EmperorGhoul chapter 9 . 5/17
Love is a slow and hard thing to master. Love at this age is so hard. Maybe Infatuation but not love. Love grows over time not two days. Love can not be forced.
W Arcturus Black chapter 16 . 5/3
Thanks for the story. Best of luck with life.
Blazeb79 chapter 13 . 1/19
Hmm i dont know but harry sounds just like anakin which sucks cuz i was hoping you would make harry better than that ahole. Im not gonna lie im a bit disappointed.
Haji the Monster chapter 16 . 12/16/2019
have to be honest, this is not a very original story. just go back and reread it, totally just replacing the name Harry for Anakin. no real originality or plot.
JadeEternal chapter 16 . 9/12/2018
Hi! I know you probably have gotten tons of comments like this, but would you please update? I love this story! Also, you said you had another chapter written. Thanks!
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