After date two shot FTW. Smexy times in ichigo room. Interrupted. Then the real stuff in her apt. Two thumbs up. Lovely story.

Daaww. Sweet stuff. The formatting is rough tho. Thanks for the read.

This NEEDS a continuation

if there is not lemon should be rating k but you must make anothers fics with lemon to compensate that this one dont have one i really like what hichigo said xD "if you dont claim what rightfully ours i will" xD

kinda of a letdown. you go through all the trouble of imposing all this drama and hurt/comfort crap only for it to end in such a disappointing way? that's poor worksmanship and even poorer literary skills. you need to be willing to go the distance or else no one is going to want to read your works anymore.

very good

That was a really good fic! The way you wrote tatsuki scold ichigo is exactly how I would imagine her react. There is nothing I would change in your story cuz ichigo and hime are just too amazing here, no lemon needed! Good job!

This is actually really hot!

It's sexy! Hope you write more ichihime in the future!

*Fangirl Squeal* I loved every second of it! :D

Really liked it! I actually prefer lime most of the time so I loved all the foreplay. _ I really hope you continue writing IchiHime.

enjoyed reading this. i hate that ori's so self-deprecating & insecure, but she does have some of that quality in cannon. if you choose not to continue this & leave it w/lime only, think it is ok to leave M rating given some people use it even for excessive cursing/language and adult themes or violence. no one would know its 1st bleach story, to be honest.

you could continue & make this a 2 shot or 3chapter story if you wanted, covering their date(s) before finally giving in to physical temptation (though it would be neat if their union had more meaning than a typical hookup, given their "soul mate" 5-lifetime premise plus the supernatural components of his hollow also wanting her & both having spirit power/energy that could be uncontrollably unleashed at moment of 1st few O's, theoretically, since neither would have focus in moment to have much control of it). I've always had the idea that when ichi & ori got together, anyone with spiritual sense would feel the release of reiatsu & know something happened, with close friends/family like urahara, uryuu, & isshin knowing exactly what cause of burst of spirit energy meant. haven't seen this depicted in a story, though. kinda surprising. good luck w/future i-h stories.

i loved it, i can't wait for the next one -

Great 1st chapter I enjoy it a lot ) and don't think of your story as petty just because you feel that others might feel that way, you should have more confidence in your writing. As for lemons you should give it a try. You'll never know how good it will come out unless you give it a try, let your creative side run wild ). So please continue to write this story I want to know what happens next )

Well, this was a very good first fanfiction.

The only thing that makes their issues "petty" is that you exaterated their personality flaws from the HM arc to the extreme.

Ichigo is not an average horny teen, actually waiting longer to lose his virginity would make keeping control easier, you don't know what your missing after all.

Orihime, for her Ichigo is one of her fantasies something she can cherish and savior for the future. Also Orihime is not shy or self-concious at all, except when it comes to Ichigo. Actually her intelligence shows through that she hasn't just randomly told her feelings to Ichigo. Even though that is what many of her fans want (including me), it is not prudent because of everything else going on in their lives.

When Kubo created their personalities he obviously forgot what it was like to be a teenager, the reason I say this is because they are far more mature then most people in highschool these days. Which is why almost any attempt at getting them to act like typical teens is character derailment.

I digress , keep writing.