| Reviews for Hope for the Future |
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   Scissors Dolphin chapter 4 . 7/30 Jesus, work on your formatting and English. Why is this chapter center-justified? |
| nikki nein chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 pan: im gonna be a super saoyan like you gohan: it takes hard work pantransforms into super saiyan like nothing* gohan: how did this became a childs play thing |
| Noah chapter 4 . 12/24/2018 This is a great story! I even read "Destiny's Blessings" and it was amazing as well! But...and I'm just letting you know...there are a few SPELLING ERRORS, like when Pan called 18 a "which" it's actually spelled "witch". Other than that It's FANTASTIC! :) |
| Noah chapter 21 . 11/7/2018 The Big Guy's name is "Piroshki" and the Blonde Guy's name is "Caroni". |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 30 . 7/30/2018 You know I liked it a lot and I certainly think it was a waste that bread would not have learned the technique of teleporting and they would have gone for it because their land is without God ... and that is very sad or good they already have an intergalactic machine go for it ... but I really liked your fic (even though the saga of Buu disappeared) |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 25 . 7/30/2018 You know Gohan took it well ... that is to say your 14 year old daughter gets married with an adult of 18 and just lets it go ... and sleep together ! Bulma and milk jejeje I thought it would be harder |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 22 . 7/30/2018 I love when picolo tells Goku the truth and cries when cel kills the androde 16 :( |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 20 . 7/30/2018 Oh I did not spread it so fast ... but good. The bites or I had read before but you did it without having relationships and that was new. |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 18 . 7/30/2018 Oh seriously the other movie o.0 hehehe |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 17 . 7/30/2018 Oh the movie o.0 hehehe |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 16 . 7/30/2018 How hateful ... I would have gone with my grandfather and my father and then I would go with my best friend. |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 15 . 7/30/2018 I could not help looking for the sayan suit |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 11 . 7/30/2018 I really wanted to read the epic reaction of picolo hehehe and good chapter |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 10 . 7/30/2018 Oh really I would like to see the reaction of picolo if with the bulma was epic imagine that of Gohan who is like a son to him |
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 8 . 7/30/2018 Different. Crazy but interesting |
