Oh my god this is absolutely marvelous! Actually made me cry in some parts. Their love story is beautiful and I love how you didn't write Pitch as an overly sadistic villain like what others do in BlackIce fics. Hope you update soon!

Ah, what a lovely resolution of sorts! Very nicely written (and heated) coupling, and all the rest of this was so sweet. Worth the wait! It's been very nice to see pitch find some redemption of a sort, and I'm a terrible sucker for the self-pitying sort of "I must let him go; he could never want ME" mindset, which was so nicely portrayed here. Lovely to hear from you again!

Yes that was grear cant wait for the aftermath

This is a really cute story and I can't wait to read more!

Damn, I need another chapter!

aw 3

I just imagined Jack loosing grip on that tree branch of his at that statement before scrambling to hold on tight shouting, "WHAT?!"

Pitch amused me.

Thank you for this new chapter, I can not wait to see what will happen between Jack and Pitch from now on

Can't wait to read what Pitch will do next with Jack on the tour.

Yes yes and yeas again!

I'm so glad to see this story continued. It would have been a real shame to see this left unfinished, it holds so much potential.

Thank you so much for the new chapter, so beautiful and sad çAç
Continue in this way dear

Yay! you updated :D
this story's really cool, i reread the whole thing again.

keep up the good work.

So um, this was updated over a year ago...are you going to update soon? Cuz I started this fic, and now I'm really into it! And it was getting really good! So...yeah... :D