Considering all the crap the Admiral has given him, it's not surprising that Tim finally had a belly full. But-with Owens-a good lawyer might well get him off. The evidence is solid, and it wouldn' be he first time a Cuckoo kicked the other birds our of the nest. And yet-Owens appears to have a good record as a SEAL in the Navy. The Admiral seems to be standing by his man, so to speak. But even if he got off-his career (and possibly that of Adm. McGee) would be ruined. Definate courtmartial in any case, Jag would likely officiate; thier jurisdiction. Possible dishonorable discharge, at the very least. Yes, Tim saw him-but he wasn't in very good shape-probably heavily medicated-and some might take his testimony as "sour grapes" to get back at the Adm.. As a fmr. SEAL, Owens could find all sorts of jobs-legal & illegal. So-another enemy for for the Adm.,-he leaves the Navy when he gets cancer in any case (His COD in other stories.) And Tim may/may not forgive him. But that's a new story.

Owens is a SEAL, yes-in this story. But in another story on this fandom-so is Tony. A SEAL called Honey Badger-and a medical doctor, an ER Surgeon to boot. (Remembered the story, but can't think of the author offhand.) Guess who I think would win that dust-up. But in this story, Gibbs hasn't yet discovered Tony's 2nd life, and stopped them from fighting. In any case, fighting in a hospital is a no-no in military regulations. Just as well Tony only gave Owens a bloody nose.

Good as heck story. I was so mad at Tim's dad though out this story!

This story was great! I really like how you highlighted everyone's thoughts and feelings! You are a great author! I liked Tim's decision to cut ties with his so called father!

Boy am I glad it enden like this! Tbh he has a great dad in Gibbs, and the Admiral can go fuck himself. I know he's hurting and all but I really want him to get over it somehow and be the man everyone knows he can be!

A good story

that was quite a rough ride for Tim. It's amazing how many folk are allergic to penicillin. Glad Tim got better. Well done with this story.

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This is getting tense. poor Tim. poor team.

Where do you meet such sadistic characters? This is good but I hope Tim is going to survive.

oh dear, where's McGee?

Well, still going strong. Glad you brought Dornegat into your story; he wasn't used nearly enough in the program - they wasted a good actor there.
Poor Tim, it is hard to deal with your own parent in such situations and in our world the son often gets the blame.

I like this, but there are a lot of poor father/child relationships in NCIS

Admiral McGee is a real piece of shit!

Really? That's the end? What a cop out.

I'm sorry your grandchild was in the hospital; I hope all is well now. We (your readers) understand that things come up. This story is too good to stop reading simply because it's not regularly updated. I truly appreciate you taking the time out of your busy schedule to quench our thirst for an addition to this story.