i think it was awsome! please continue its good so far...

Hi i really like this story i am a fan of the Division and Jinny is my Fav because i live in the UK i have only seen the First Series but istill love it. Any way i look forward to reading the next part.

Eve XXX

hey grl, it's me... you wanted a review rite?:)

i like ur story & hope to read more of it..even tho it does make me want to flood the comp. room lol.. o well

great job! :)