Pls put more

Nice

FINISH IT

Good chapter! Can't wait for next chapter!

Ike y u no be in next smash bros?

This chapter was beautiful beyond belief. Quite ironic that Ganondorf's weakness is towards his sworn enemy's younger self. Ha, well I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! Ike isn't going to be in the next brawl? Noooooooo! Why'd you have to make me so sad. Regardless, this story seems as though it is somewhat coming to a close. I really can't wait to see what happens next. I can't stand cliffhangers!

The other chapter's already up, so I'm going to head there right now, but really quickly, I like what you did in this chapter! I really hope that Samus doesn't just stand by. That would make her character kind of pointless; she would just be there to be in a relationship with another character.

I kind of have to say 'eh' to Ganondorf. Sure, it is cute, but unrealistic, I think. I just don't see him cracking under 'cuteness'. Although there's something to be said for artistic license. After all, when I think about it, Toon Link probably wouldn't behave that childishly either. He's supposed to have 'come of age' in his own game.

I did like how he described the underworld as reeking of death and regret.

I was kind of surprised that DP didn't directly mention Dark Zelda. The fight was fairly believable though. DP isn't so emotionally invested like the other two, so he thinks more rationally than they do.

Then Link runs off on his own then is struck by just how stupid that was.

Well, that was interesting. Peach is all calm and wise when DL is there, but when he leaves she turns into a confused wreck. It's sort of like they bring out the best in each other.

I laughed at how you got the girls away from the rest. You mentioned that you had needed to figure out a way to get them separated from the rest, but this would never, in a million years, have occurred to me. But now it seems so obvious, and it works. Just because one never mentions mundane things like going to the bathroom in stories and games doesn't mean you can't draw on it when necessary.

Ike is brutal. I was kind of like 'woah' at his complete and utter lack of sympathy. He's nasty.

really really good chapter! update soon!

The only real feedback I have for you is that some of the random AN's inserted here and there made the story seem slightly disorganized. All and all it was still good! I really hope Ike comes to his senses and doesn't go through with it. I really can't wait for the continuation of this story!

I love epicfire123 she is so funny

I have to say, it's somewhat refreshing to see Ike not in some best friend group with Marth and Link. Although I certainly enjoy it when someone has them get up to teenage shenanigans together. And him actually deciding to kill them for the right price... This is getting more and more interesting.

Well, as you know already the only thing I can personally approve of doing to Peach is brutally murdering her, so I won't comment on your pairing. Actually, I'll comment on the fact that it is a very unusual pairing, Peach kind of turns DL into a different person than he's been the whole fic.

Speaking of DL, he's gone from acting all confident to being scared and timid. He keeps on surprising me. And I have to wonder what, if anything, he's going to do about his sister. I'd imagine he'd want her away from Hades, because Hades seems like the type to dispose of someone he's tired of, and I don't feel like he'll like her forever. So even if she's not in danger now, she would be if she stays there.

nice chapter! really good story! can't wait for next chapter!

Psh, Ike won't do it. Will you Ike? WILL YOU? I guess I'll have to wait and see. But another plot twist is being thrown our way! But come on, his hatred towards Pit can't be that terrible! I wonder how they'll get Ike to the Underworld. I have a feeling Samus will be going along. Continue soon! This is one of my favourite stories right now!