Reviews for Don't Fall Away
Lovetoright chapter 3 . 3/7
Verb tense. Please watch for those. (Don’t take this the wrong way. I’m an author too)
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2018
Good
Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2018
I just found this really awesome fic and I'm so hyped for it! I love the way that you wrote the characters and Harry's emotionalness. I can't wait to see the dursleys get what's coming to them! I love this story and it doing amazing! 10/10
HarryPotters1 chapter 5 . 6/18/2018
Please, please, PLEASE finish this story! It is just purely awesome! You are an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!
Gurgaraneth chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Plz update sn
fariedragon chapter 5 . 3/3/2016
Interesting start is this abandoned or did you make it into a new story can not wait to see more
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 5 . 11/25/2015
Just a little confused. In chapter 3 you said that Hedwig hadn't come back yet but in this chapter you said that Hedwig was still at the Dursley's.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
I love it
Please write more !
BeLlIxiEs chapter 5 . 6/28/2012
That was a weird last chapter...xD off to read the other part
Lw117149 chapter 5 . 5/16/2012
oh more more more pleaseZ! when you can...*S*
Cliara Aedai chapter 5 . 1/19/2012
Well, that was a great way to end it! if only you would finish the story now! And to the person who reviewed before me, you are annoying. Who cares about a small mix up in the A/N! So I will make up for what he/she forgot to say... THIS IS BRILLIANT! certain small errors exist, like the random change in tense, but overall, a great storyline! If you ever continue it, I would be more than happy to bets for you! And if you don't continue it, it was a great beginning. Awesome job :)
TheSaurus chapter 5 . 12/29/2011
AN quote: "... bare with me..."

From "Merriam Webster":

bare

verb \ˈber\

bared, bar·ing

Definition of BARE

transitive verb: to make or lay (something) bare (see 1bare): uncover

...

Examples of BARE: He bared his chest to show the scar.

...

bear

verb \ˈber\

bore borne also born bear·ing

Definition of BEAR

transitive verb

...

— bear with: to be indulgent, patient, or forbearing with (someone)
Crest chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
Ummh... what's with the past tense / present tense mix-up?
Crest chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
You really, really have to make the chapters longer.
Crest chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Ummh... what's with the micro-chapters?
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