| Reviews for Birds die if they can't fly |
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ThatNintendoGeek chapter 8 . 10/4/2013 I've always loved the idea of takao going blind but there were never really much fanfics on it but then I found this one and I was so happy! i finally found a multi-chapter fanfic that's well written and also has a blind takao in it! thankyou so much for writing this amazing fic and bringing blind takao to life haha :) |
UnderdogHero chapter 8 . 9/5/2013 This is definitely something I want to keep actively reading. First time I've seen this plot used here too. Can't wait to see the next chapter, hope you start uploading again soon! |
Twinss R chapter 8 . 6/20/2013 Aaah, I really hope you'll continue this story... I'm really curious and interested of hearing Izuki's side of the story as well. |
Twinss R chapter 2 . 6/18/2013 Hmmm, I really like this story so far! o (I just finished reading chapter 2) It's a really interesting scenario. You are doing a good job at explaining their movements and thoughts but you have made a couple of grammar and spelling (mostly spelling) errors that make the story a bit difficult to read... Maybe you could find a beta reader? :) I believe if your story didn't have those mistakes, then even more people would read it... Because really, so far, I'm quite intrigued to be honest! :D The concept is really sad of course, but you're making a great job at writing this... And hehe, I like how all of them are in character, especially Izuki with his puns... ;) |
Miserable-Soul chapter 8 . 6/16/2013 Awhh so the midorima and takao part is gone? I think that part was really well written. I felt the sheer emotion they felt in there. QwQ. I felt so sad and happy at the parts and all. Well I'm going to try reading about izuki and moriyama parts then o_o I'm not really a big fan though .. But I'll read it cause your writing style is awesome w. I should give that pairing a chance |
hlflores chapter 8 . 6/10/2013 (ノヮ)ノ*:・゚ THIS FANFIC IS PERFECT. |
GPS-OrangeWorld chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 The grammar is a bit off in places, but I like the idea of this storyline. I'd suggest using less repetitive language in the same paragraphs though. Perhaps you should consider finding a beta, there are many in this fandom. |
Drunken Strawberries chapter 7 . 5/14/2013 This is so sweet. I love it. But who's gonna comfort Izuki instead of Takao? |
PiWrite chapter 7 . 5/13/2013 OH GOOD. I WAS LIKE WHAT ABOUT IZUKI THEN I READ THE BOTTOM /O/ |
PiWrite chapter 6 . 5/6/2013 I think Izuki should join in with Midorima and Takao. Otherwise he should be paired with someone cmpletelly random. Like Hayama or something /laughs |
PiWrite chapter 5 . 5/6/2013 MIDORIMA CALM YOUR EYELASHES. HE WENT TO IZUKI BECAUSE THEY SHARED SOMETHING IN COMMON AND PROBABLY ALSO TO WARN HIM ABOUT THE SICKNESS. PLZ YOUR CARROTNESS. STOP BEING JELLY. |
PiWrite chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 guhhh these two. Supporting each other /sobs friendshipisdabest. |
rii96 chapter 6 . 5/6/2013 Izuki and Moriyama pleaseeee! XD Haha! AND THIS CHAPTER IS SOOO CUUUUUTTTEEEEE 3 3 3 |
mitasekai chapter 6 . 5/5/2013 My tears wont stop to faaalll hiks hiks This is too much for meeeehh I love both of them, i love u more who make this great story I still wish Takao will be healed hiks hiks That thing really sad me :'( |
Will review l8r2 chapter 6 . 5/3/2013 Oh my god yes omgggg you pair Izumi with Moriyama yeeeessss Oki will review a better review later regarding the story hehe |