I love it update soon

(Too lazy to log in) DAMNIT AUTHOR KEEP GOING! WHAT DID NATSU TAKE!?

(Too lazy to log in) DAMNIT AUTHOR KEEP GOING! WHAT DID NATSU TAKE?!

(menma: she loved the chapter I did to but let's make TheRealms look like the one who says the same thing over and over again and Ryder ... we have much to dicuss :3 XD can't wait until the next update I'm going to make this review short since I'm sick XD TheRealms and me are sick XD and for the fictional character to become reality who would it be ... it's hard to choose XD) I know right (menma: shut up I'm talking) menma gets ill when she is sick (menma: anywho that character is ... this is hard ... I would choose a really geeky anime guy from one of those high-tech animes) why? (menma: because they can make a portal and bring a lot more anime guys) agreed (Menma: of course you do ... because you are me) ... well bye can't wait until the next update this was a very good chapter it's okay if you update late I mean I barely update because I'm addicted to playing minecraft XD ... (menma: you said this would be short) well me and you babble bye :D.

Oh noooo what's gonna happen with the dark side T-T hehe that sounded so awesome xx and I would have a unicorn or a dragon :'D cause they would be so awesome to have! :D

what is in the book...did they meant the book...

OF COURSE FREED IS INVINCIBLE! HE IS THE ALMIGHTY FREED JUSTINE WHO IS SOMETIMES BEING MISTAKEN AS "Fries", "Fried" (he doesn't even LOOK fried), and "Freud"! w

Why the cliffy? TTTT

I don't like sting! I hope you know I really love your story it's so cute and mysterious at the same time!

I'm glad u enjoy the reviews!

Poor Igneel and Natsu there life is gonna be hell

OH MY GOD YOUR RIGHT! I was really hoping to read one of your chapters soon so I was so existed to see you updated, good job!

Omg u gave me a shout out! Thanks and u better have that chapter up soon! It's now getting really interesting!

oooohhhh loved the chapter (inner me: MY GOSH THEREALMS WHAT HAVE I BEEN TALKING TO YOU ABOUT) o.o you know what inner me I should give you a name like zakky said (inner me: I slowly and slowly start to despise you more and more) I will name you menma (Menma: ah you even changed my name WHY DID YOU NAME ME AFTER THAT NARUTO SHIPPUDEN MOIVE CHARACTER) because I felt like it o3o u mad bro? (Menma: I'm going to kill you in your sleep) but we are the same person? (Menma: that just makes it easier) Okay anywho I get why the update was a little late I'm not mad :3 (Menma: like your thought means anything) shudup, anywho I hope your sister is okay I wish you and her best of luck. And yes freed can 'techinically' be invincible, why didn't they put him in the grand magic games I mean seriously (Menma: it's because he has never used Nakama power to the extent of over us like most of the people on the teams except for laxus he's just awesome and mira and gajeel and) okay just ignore the menma in the background but anywho yeah he could just write runes around the stadium only downfall is that it would take a lllloooonnnnggg time. Anywho (menma: anywho therealms second most used word better get used to it or you're going to want to punch the screen) shudup (Menma: if you tell me to shut up you are technically telling yourself to shut up) ... (Menma: u mad bro) so yeah how should I handle 'that' *motions toward the annoying inner menma* anywho good luck I hope your sister is okay and once again loved the (Menma: she loved the chapter bye) ... I hate you sometimes.

who would want to kill igneel...hmmm.. the mystery...

Aww well i hope she gets better soon. But for the chapter...SHIT GRAY FOUND THE BOOK...but he got over it quickly. AND POOR IGNEEL...WHO THE HELL WOULD WANT TO KILL HIM