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Ok just no i know this is supposed to be an au but come on for starters you clearly made self insert and tip NEVER insert yourself into your storys ever becuase most pepole dont even know you other than text or an image on there screen so it just comes off as self centered and weird who wants to read fan fic involving someone they dont know?
also please stop im sick of the sexual fan fics there all over here and its not what this site is ment for also isint the entire point of the lorax is that its just cautionary tale about someone anyone takes to much without seeing it and the messege of it being how we can help our enviroment and make the world a better place its simple uniqe and timelessly written dispite being for all ages it was primarly created to help pepole especaly children to help the enviroment and stop mass polution sex is not even the last thing suess was thinking of when writing the lorax also how did the nic name oncie happen between ted and the oncler the only person who ever called him that was his mom and she is likely dead or any number of things so did ted make that nicname up himself?
If so than thats just creepy so is the fact that both the oncler and ted are male meaning this is homosexual fan fic i mean theres nothing wrong with being homosexual but writing fan fics about it is just bad and weird suess never wanted this nobody wanted this just becuase this is an alternate universe doesent make it right also im not attacking you in critisising your story please remove this and dont contribute to the number of weird stories invloving this.

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I came here from Lord Roy. And what are you doing with your life?

What the fuck. Thats it thats my review

I'm gonna twist your rectum into a Gordian Pretzel if you don't stop manually excreting this unholy garbage.

WHAT THE F**** did I just read

More more chapte and 8 please thanks

I LOVED IT!
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Math seems to give me odd feels as well. I usually draw odd little ships on the side of my paper, and then have to recopy tem onto another paper, so my teacher doesn't think I'm deranged or something.

I don't know what it is about your math class but its creating some pretty good stuff. You should like seriously continue his story.