When you say cnonological order, do you mean the orded it should be read, or the order that fits into the cannon timline?

The first chapter for some reason I expected CRDL to be hanging Ruby and have Weiss there to watch as her love slowly died a horrible death.

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...is it weird that I wish this scene would be in the actual show?

Seems like the fanfic-version of RWBY "Red" Trailer to me

I think in your case, the lack of reviews is because people don't want to just gush like fangirls XD And there's TOTALLY nothing to complain about. It's wonderful. Solidly done, well hung together in spite of your disclaimers of not really connecting well. I look foreward to lots more :-) And everyone hope REAL HARD at Rooster teeth that they don't get scared off by people who aren't even fans comlaining... I've watched all the way through Season 3, and I think a solid romance between Ruby and Weiss would enhance an already great show immensely. As your work shows, it doesn't have to be all hentai or even ecchi, it could ENHANCE the strength of teh characters, to have even more than friendship to fight for.

Iam a little to the "party" to say, but after reading this chapters I feel very happy, they where wrote very good and the Hurt/Tragedy chapter was really good I really enjoyed it and I while follow this writer in the future.

A well done story. There were a lot of emotions put into the story from joy to sadness as each character experiences many events that changes them. It was amusing at some parts with how Weiss and Ruby interacted with one another as well as endearing. Some dark moments that took place to move the story along as well and how Ruby and Weiss seem to be able to pass them. An enjoyable story. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

I've read everything in your Red & White collection, and it's been a true pleasure. Thank you for writing it, and I will definitely come back to it again.

Cute story! You're an excellent writing.

Such a well written piece. It was so good I read it 6 times in a row. Weiss is my also my favourite RWBY character so her near death hit me hard. Thank you for letting me experience this please never stop writing these marvellous fan fiction works of art

BAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! YOU HAVE GOT TO START THIS SERIES UP AGAIN! SAME WITH BEAUTY AND THE BEAST! IT'S JUST TOO DAMN GOOD!

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE THE FLUFF!

T-T Don't you EVER do that to me again. (but it was good)