WOW! That was amazing, and no it didn't suck it felt like I was Carla and had witnessed everything she did! Again that was amazing!

Soooo cuuuuttee! I loved the flashbacks, you're very descriptive :)

That was beautiful. It was very well written, my favorite parts were when Johnny first held Carla and when she was worrying about being an older sister. Love it 3 Are you going to do this for other members of the gang though because your writing was very beautiful in this one. That last line "On the bright side though... I know for a fact that... Jocelyn and I were going to be aunts... because Johnny promised us that, I started laughing :) I'm probably going to start reading your stories, so can't wait to read more of your stories :)