| Reviews for Nightmares In Paradise |
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unknown chapter 29 . 1/24 Zi cliffhanger :'( Been a while since you last updated though, I hope you're doing well |
RYJAN chapter 28 . 10/18/2019 I honestly thought that if Leon & Helena had kids together that they would name their son Adam (after the President) and Debbie (after Helena's sister) ! |
TokaKirishima chapter 1 . 2/26/2019 Why did you stop your story like this ?! Where is his son? the last meeting between Leon and Ada no it should not stop like that TwT ... |
davinacrazy chapter 11 . 7/13/2016 Please marry me Leon |
nam06101993 chapter 28 . 6/11/2014 Ada : " dont you think you maybe walking behind your father's shadow ? " Ellie : " Bitch please , all agents are behind his shadow " Ada : " dont be rude ans tell me why is so ? " Ellie : " cause thata a big ass shadow you re talking about " Lolololol |
nam06101993 chapter 18 . 6/10/2014 Oh my god . I wish your story NEVER END ! Soooo amazing ! I love your fiction so much , definitely the best fiction i have EVER read ! Though at chapter 18 which im currently reading . I don't seem to understand why Leon was so weak . I mean ... he himself is THE Leon. ! The one and only ! The legend itself ! Told to have survive the racoon incident as he killed countless terrorfying Lickers and even G-virus B.O.W that is said to have the power to destroy an entire trained army easily , not to mention the big ass troll in europe or the countless immortal enemies with nothing but his sheer might of godlike strength and speed itself , and there was Krauser to be his match ! But here ... Leon got pawned by what ? 5 or more fat ass richness wimp that hardly got any combat skills ? Oh god ... the logic really kills me ... But anyway u rock ! Sequels please ! |
nam06101993 chapter 2 . 6/6/2014 Chris see Claire half naked body Leon hover over and see it too Leon flash a run for the door but it was locked Chris slowly turn his death gaze to Leon Leon : "Shit!"... LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL BEST DRAMA EVER ! I would literaly pay to see it in games . Best moment EVER ! Love your fiction - your biggest fan |
Guest chapter 29 . 3/2/2014 The ending was something that I didn t expect. It was good to see everyone settle down and have a nice little family of their own :) but I do feel that you have rushed the ending little bit because you explained so many things so quickly. I admit though that Ada and Leon son was quite surprising twist indeed, haha. But I find it weird that why didn t she tell Leon about it. I mean it happened long before he met Helena. And yes I am not fan of Ada x Leon so please I hope that no one is gonna get angry on me because I shared my view here. |
Cloudysmile chapter 28 . 2/21/2014 Hi! it's been a longggtime since my last comment! I'm happy that our Leon had his own family and his daughter is normal and healthy! By the way, are you going make Ada have a child like what I guessed when she take a revenge on the Family? lol |
Mr. Oliver Queen chapter 29 . 2/21/2014 Noooooooo! I'm so sad that the story is over. I can't wait for the other stories to come out, so I can get my Heleon fix. This was by far, the best Heleon story I've read. |
Guest chapter 29 . 2/21/2014 This story is so amazing, the end was so amazing, everything was so amazing, I can't tell how much I loved this story |
Cosy chapter 29 . 2/21/2014 AWESOME! I was just thinking of this story last night. This was a wonderful ending, sweet and full of emotion. I'm really sad about what's going on with Ada, I feel for her. I won't lie though I had a feeling about Ada having Leon's child at some point during the story. I thought my theory got debunked though at one point, but glad to see I wasn't off about that. Looking forward to your next installments and thank you for a wonderful story. Also to the person complaining about someone else's thoughts. I would assume everyone is entitled to their view as this is a "review" section, so hop off. The person wasn't rude at all, they were just sharing how they see things. |
Justicce chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 I finished your fanfics in a single night and I'm absolutely blown away at the emotion and power you pot into your scenes. I can't wait to see what you write next Heleon or not and I hope others will still appreciate whatever work you do. You are one of the best on here! |
GUEST chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 To everyone complaining about TechnoGeckos direction with Ada and Helena stop. Really just stop. To the guest who posted before me saying how a story with Ada and Leon's child would be bad if you thought what you said was going to be rude then why did you bother? Honestly if you end up doing a sequel with everyone's kids it would be an interesting dynamic having Ellen and Sven interacting with each other. Also since these charachters are ADULTS I'm sure Helena could handle the news better than how most people are acting. Wonderful job gecko! Don't stop writing |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 I'm so sad yet so happy it's over. You've done well and to everyone x |