Reviews for Immortal Aura |
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Flenners fanfics chapter 16 . 5/12/2019 make may immortal and all Ash's friends! |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 16 . 4/16/2019 A great chapter here. |
n chapter 15 . 1/17/2019 UPDATE PLEASE ITS BEEN SO GOOOOOOOD |
Pokemonfan4life chapter 15 . 11/26/2018 Please, update this amazing story. |
Sliver Crystal of Tokyo-Moon chapter 15 . 5/6/2018 Love this story. |
everyman52 chapter 15 . 9/1/2016 Have you discontinued this if not please update |
AshKetchumForever chapter 15 . 7/22/2016 Great job! Love it! |
ChloboShoka chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 The story is really fast paced. It adds excitement, but sometimes I can get lost in the fic. |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 15 . 6/1/2016 A good chapter here. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26/2015 updateeeeeeee! |
Ayla Kurosaki chapter 14 . 7/11/2015 Please update! I love this story! |
AshKetchumForever chapter 14 . 12/18/2014 Wow. Great job! Love it! |
preety sure chapter 9 . 12/16/2014 are these multiple instances of back to the future I detect |
dragoncreators chapter 14 . 12/15/2014 Great story. You haven't really explained the laws, or why having a powerful pokemon is apparently against the law. Has Rocket taken over the government, and taking any powerful pokemon from trainers? Do they suspect drugs, and if so how can they take someone into custody over a suspicion? What if the equipment malfunctioned? Why is Ash just now deciding to not save anyone, he must have had plenty of people doubt or try to arrest him, especially as he changes identities. And why does no Officer suspect Ash is the immortal? I like the story, but it's going a little fast and more explanations would be nice. |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 12/15/2014 Interesting chapter here! |