Reviews for Immortal Aura
Flenners fanfics chapter 16 . 5/12/2019
make may immortal and all Ash's friends!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 16 . 4/16/2019
A great chapter here.
n chapter 15 . 1/17/2019
UPDATE PLEASE ITS BEEN SO GOOOOOOOD
Pokemonfan4life chapter 15 . 11/26/2018
Please, update this amazing story.
Sliver Crystal of Tokyo-Moon chapter 15 . 5/6/2018
Love this story.
everyman52 chapter 15 . 9/1/2016
Have you discontinued this if not please update
AshKetchumForever chapter 15 . 7/22/2016
Great job! Love it!
ChloboShoka chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
The story is really fast paced. It adds excitement, but sometimes I can get lost in the fic.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 15 . 6/1/2016
A good chapter here.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26/2015
updateeeeeeee!
Ayla Kurosaki chapter 14 . 7/11/2015
Please update!
I love this story!
AshKetchumForever chapter 14 . 12/18/2014
Wow. Great job! Love it!
preety sure chapter 9 . 12/16/2014
are these multiple instances of back to the future I detect
dragoncreators chapter 14 . 12/15/2014
Great story. You haven't really explained the laws, or why having a powerful pokemon is apparently against the law. Has Rocket taken over the government, and taking any powerful pokemon from trainers? Do they suspect drugs, and if so how can they take someone into custody over a suspicion? What if the equipment malfunctioned? Why is Ash just now deciding to not save anyone, he must have had plenty of people doubt or try to arrest him, especially as he changes identities. And why does no Officer suspect Ash is the immortal?

I like the story, but it's going a little fast and more explanations would be nice.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 12/15/2014
Interesting chapter here!
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