I really like your premise and writing style, but watch verb tense and POV shifts, you switched from third to first person a couple times and that can be a little confusing. Overall I find this story refreshing and think you did great work, keep it up and good luck in any future writing endeavors.

I HATE Yu soooooo much for writing such an amazing story like it just made my hart melt

lindo

sim muito bom gostei muito

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Digg can see the future! Wow they got to the relationship stage really quickly! I love it!

Even thought it's a Christmas party Felicity could still go! Parties aren't exactly religious. Also, I agree with Felicity, I would totally convert to Christianity for Oliver Queen :P

I think the baby's name is too long.

Hey great story so far! Although i am a little disappointed that the baby is not a boy :(

Beautiful

Most Romantic wedding of the year

Was that some sort of dream? I thought Felicity already knew Thea and vice versa? And that Felicity was pregnant?

Did Oliver slept with Mackena? Like in the series

Just started and i love the early chemistry you are giving these two babies of ours!

mmmm eerlijk heb ik wel een groot gedeelte overgeslagen :} sorry! maar heb wel gwn het verhaal gevolgd en vond het gwn goed, mooie olicity man. ik hoop dat je dit wel kan lezen hahahh anders zit ik hier maar wat te lullen in een andere taal XD

anyways niice story