This was such a great story. I've always wondered how different the story would have turned out if Snow actually had gone through the wardrobe with Emma, and you've written that possibility beautifully.

Amazing story!

But But But...CAPTAIN SWAN! CAPTAIN SWAN NEEDS TO HAPPEN. IF IT DOESNT

good story

I loved this plot but I was really hoping Nathan turned out to be Killian. Other wise it was perfect!

Amazing Story! :D Is a sequel possible?

This was fangtastic, absolutely amazing. I loved that Snow got a chance to raise Emma, and adding Pinocchio to the mix was a brilliant idea. He made a great Uncle and brother. :3

Thank you!

Aww super cute ending

Can't wait for the next update! So good! :-)

Thank you for a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. This whole time I was just so sure that Nathan was going to turn out to be a bad guy, but it turns out he's just another guy scared to meet his fiancée's parents. Now I feel bad for spending the entire story not trusting him. I've really enjoyed this story, and I can't wait to see more of your writing in the future. Take care.

Sorry but it just makes me so sad that David is not getting called Dad and Snow is sharing a child with another man. Ah well, I'll assume August starts calling David Dad and lives with them. And that they still have baby Neal. And that Emma eventually calls him Dad.

I loved and enjoyed reading your story and trying to figure out what will happen next! The last chapter was funny and very family friendly! I hope you plan to write another story.

Aww. Loved the ending. It's been a great ride, and thank you for sharing this story with all of us. Hope to see you with another fic (maybe the sequel?)soon!

Great end to a sweet story! :-)