oh my sweet God, I'm so happy that i found this fic! loved every word of it, thanks so much!
Luffy is innocent yet so—demanding. And Nami is perfect. I love it all! Thank you for writing this!

I. NNNNEEDD MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

It would be lovely if you make a sequel of this story, this is one of the best LuNa story i have ever read

Lol love this! LuNa is so adorable!
cute story!

I've read the "supposedly" sequel of this chapter,,! I'd really love to know how they officially started dating. I thought the omake of this chapter contained that kind of scene… But I guess I never got what I wished, right?!
Still,, your story is all good & nice. I'm not very fond of naruto so I just read your OP fic ('n cuz I'm a highly LuNa Lover, if I may add,! (‵′) )

I have truly enjoyed reading your story And having such a funny time.

Please keep going! Loving it

Wow thats a great story. i hope you update it. I know you wrote that this is a oneshot but i would love to see more of this fic

I thought I'll die from laughing so much, thank you so much for creating such an amazingly funny story!xD

Haha this was great! I really liked it! I totally wish there was more though. Anyway, great job! :)

-Yvonne

Could You possibly write an update to this ? I know what you said but I think this may just be the best high school fic I've ever read , Plus what I think might be one of the Most accurate depictions of Luffy trying to woo a girl I've ever read .

Nooo, my far finger pressed post when I was just trying to scroll up! It gave me an error message when I tried to post another review on my account and I couldn't find a way to edit my review on the mobile site.

It cut me off when I was trying to say something like "never mind the terror-struck expressions of her prisoners."

The fic felt like a oneshot, but it wouldn't hurt it if it was expanded. But if not, it had a nice "the end" feel. It left some open space but not enough to feel that there NEEDS to be a continuation. It'd definitely be interesting to see how their relationship progresses and how the other characters take up their roles in this AU though, hehe.

I noticed that the word "those" (I think that's what you were aiming for.) was misspelled in the first sentence of the 2nd paragraph.
Here it is:
She had looked vaguely impressive to him then; her head had somehow swelled to five times its original size in her rage, red tinted eyes narrowed to dangerous slits, her mouth lined with huge, jagged teeth not unlike thsoe of a vicious man-eating piranha.

It's toward the end and it's between unlike and of a vicious...

Otherwise, I didn't notice anything wrong. It flowed fine. Great diction as always. Everything was clear to me {: Oh!

I noticed you used the word ado and I just wanted to give you kudos for that. I don't know, I think it's a pretty old word and it isn't used too often these days. Reminds of Shakespeare's "Much Ado About Nothing," haha.

I hope the air has been okay in your side of the ocean!

Hi Paws!

I'm on my phone right now, so I'm sorry if I don't catch all my typos and such. I'm stuck in the car because of all this traffic. I can't do any homework or much of anything else so I thought I'd try to review a fic!

This is one of the few OP fanfics I've read so I don't have much experience on what I think may be "OOC" or not. But I can imagine all the characters just fine doing the actions you write of! Especially when Nami is listing the violations and computing the cost in her head, haha. I do like how you mentioned Brook in there and how he may have influenced Luffy; it's very adorable. Usopp the worrier is such a good friend haha. He tries to steer Luffy out of trouble but it seems that nothing can deter Luffy once he set his mind on something! Even if it is troublesome, like Skypeia or Enies Lobby, hehe.

I thought I'd find Luffy x Nami strange because I guess I enjoy the whole crew's dynamic more than individual relationships, but the fic was really enjoyable and hilarious. I can just imagine Luffy being awestruck the moment he sees Nami screaming at those delinquents, never mind the terror-struck expressi

so hilarious! IC despite the high school setting and especially with Luffy's carefree attitude.

This really seems like an incomplete story :D, not to mention that it was really good and left me wanting for more :) and from what i see there's no sequel :(