You captured their characters wonderfully, and having their special moment spent under the starry sky made it even more special, and very fitting. Well done.

Wonderful job you did here! I found it very realistic, romantic and hot

Heheh! Damn if that wasn't hot. But it was very sweet too.
I love how you made little references to things that happened in the book. And it was really a nice setting you created. I admit it was a pity he wasn't better "prepared", though. Oh, well...
Thumbs up for you, Cal._;)

This is so good! Honestly, it annoys me when I read fics that are clearly HORRIBLY written, and yet people leave reviews saying how amazing they are. But yours deserves more recognition - because underneath everything, your writing itself is great and you capture the truth of the book, its essence. While your writing style is different from Meyer's, I could honestly see something like this fitting into the original book if it were smuttier. Great job!

Very sweet! Well done.

this was so soft and beautiful ;_; some parts were hot and still fluffy, i loved 3

That was amazingly well done :) Ive read a couple of fanfics of Ian and Wanda's first time but yours made the most sense. It makes perfect sense why Ian wouldn't be prepared, its not like you'd ever expect little innocent Wanda to be so impatient ;) Of course they'd have to wait like Mel and Jared did :P Anyways I thought this was great and written perfectly to capture both characters' personalities :)

AHGHHHHHHHHHH! THAT WAS AMAZING! LIKE ALL CAPS AMAZIMG! YOU HAVE SO MUCH TALENT! AND YOU CAUGHT THEIR PERSONALITIES PERFECTLY!

Wanda actually did not really like the outdoors since living on earth because the space made her anxious and felt strange after living underground for so long.

Amazing! It was so romantic - I wish I had what they do. Ian and Wanda are like soulmates, and they deserve each other. Their love is pure and deep, and you wrote it flawlessly.

So very beautiful...sexy and romantic. The perfect combination. Great job!

love it :) xxxx

Marvellous.
The way you described de entire situation was excellent. I almost felt their emotions like my owns!
I love this pairing; and i'm in love with Ian, and i think that Wanda deserves him more tha anyone.
Congrats :)

great story!

That was cuuuuutte! (In a weird, perverted way.) I loved all your detail about the stars and fallingthrough the sky when they lay back on the hill. Made me want to go out to my front yard and do it (especially because it's nearly 11:30pm). I adore both of them a lot. :3 And if I lived where they did, I'm be outside all of the time at night (but truth be told, I'm a bit of a night owl). It's just so pretty and overwhelming, and definitely romantic if you've got someone special with you like she did. :D
Haha And the shoe thing? Aaawwwwwkwwwwwwwaaaaarrrd
Terrific job on this deary. :) Your writing is wonderful and I thoroughly enjoyed it. 3