Its not kidnapping its surprise adoption...

Do a sexual this story was awesome.

Okay um, I just wanted to say that I really like the ideas behind this story. You set yourself apart that way. But, the story itself is underdeveloped and choppy. It feels like you took the easy way out by just telling what you wanted to change, rather than setting up the plot and showcasing your changes. That and the details throughout just don't match up with each other (dates, ages, past/present tense, etc,). If you went through and worked on it, this could be a really cool story. Keep writing!

I'm really not sure why this is as popular as it is. You started with a stellar idea for a story: Harry Potter raised as a Mandalorian, but you executed it fairly poorly, and not just grammatically. There is no real story to speak of, just scraps of one strung together that make little sense. I'd love to see a rewrite with an actual plot: maybe Jango picks up Harry as an infant before becoming a wizard, then return to Hogwarts to settle the fuel he has with Voldemort and train in the use of magic, all the while adhering to the Resol'nare. Killing Voldemort immediately got rid of the conflict, and nothing else replaced it. Hadrian's use of mando'a was really jarring as well. Supposedly he slips into mando'a when angry but he only uses one word, not a sentence or phrase like one should expect.

Kansas, really? Harry Potter takes place in England! Like the story but fix the geography plz

Unfortunately your English and grammar are atrocious making this no worth taking the time necessary to read it.

Please, please, please do a sequel for this

All in all it is very interesting, the only thing that was truly off putting was the fact that you spelled several names incorrectly. Dumbledore and Voldemort being the most prominent. It's usually a deal breaker for me when I read a fic. Kudos on what I did finish though and good luck on your future writing!

an excellent story I am a great fan of the Mandalorians - so few remember that Jaster Mereel gave Jango his birthright. the title of Mandalore [and helmet].

You have done well, Mandalor'

Kunneg_Andris

This is interesting. I hope that you follow up on it as the story went by too quickly. I wouldn't mind seeing about Harry finding the forges.

you should do an sequel. It might be interesting on how to see Harry being raised on Mandalore

interesting chapter, it looks as if Dumbles is getting to realize that Hadrian is anything but easily lead

I think that Harry will end up taking nothing for chance and will try to get back at the ones who had caused him harm

Dumbles is over his head, especially with an Mandalorian trained Harry Potter

a good chapter